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I'm SO sorry I didn't review this earlier. I've been meaning to let you know what a great contributor you are to the world of Adult X-men Fanfiction. This was a very good little series. Each chapter was small and focuses. Each coupling was nicely detailed and very hot. I have to say it's rare to find stories of this quality on this site. Your story was very refreshing. I only wish there were more like it. My favorite scenes were the ones with Cyclops and Jean, Emma's fantasy, and Storm. You were creative and insightful with each scene. It didn't feel like PWP even if that was the major theme. I really applaud you for telling all these nicely developed tales. I really do hope that you continue to write X-men stories of this nature. This section needs quality work like yours! Thank you for crafting this series and I look forward to seeing what you have in store next!

That Blink chapter was H-O-T!

A nice chapter. Given Lorna's part in XMLII, it was unclear at the beginning whether she was using her magnetic powers or whether she'd been captured and subject to some 'interesting' interrogation techniques.

This was an excellent chapter. I have a soft spot for Betsy/Scott stuff. A minor issue you switched from Bess to the correct Betsy halfway through the chapter.

Very good chapter. Quite an unusual depiction of Scott and Jean. They're usually written as being much more conservative.

I've always thought of Ororo as sexy - VERY sexy - in her own subtle way, so I enjoyed this. She was perfectly in character, and this definitely followed canon with what we know of her previous bond with Forge. He always considered her a little frigid, so his challenge to her worked well here. She's definitely a character you can see masturbating once in a while, with all of her intimacy issues. Thanks for writing this chapter, it was excellent.

"Since when do you have squirting orgasms? I thought they were a myth." Classic. You made these two more likable than I usually find them.

Well. Regardless of what you think of the character I think you did a good job of characterising storm in this.

Trying to think who you've got left to do: Jean Grey. Maybe Psylocke and Emma Frost? Though they're we more prominent in XML1 and you've moved on to 2 now... Blink perhaps? I can't remember how old she was in XML2.

"Itty Bitty Titty Committee" made me chuckle. That's a detail about Jubilee that I can see her having as a hangup.

This is pretty cool. Never thought I'd see XML fanfiction. Considering its all ready a ridiculous mismatch of continuities.

Still given the titles are these all going to be Masturbation shorts?