rate_review Reviews

Frist let me say that you have a great imagination and your story is really fun. Ok that is where the praise stops because frankly your writing sucks, that is to say that you really need a beta who’s first language is English and knows how to use punctuation. Your sentence structure is ass backwards most of the time and you often use contradictory wording, or just flat out the wrong words.

But dont get me wrong, I really did enjoy the story I read the hole thing! ^-^