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June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
well if syl and ivan are two perfectly, healthy people, and if they have been going at it like a pair of jack rabbits, then it's about freaken time that syl had to guess that she's preggy...
great chapter tho...keep up the great work!! and update when ever you can...
great chapter tho...keep up the great work!! and update when ever you can...
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June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Registered just to review this.
At first I was hesitant because Mary Sue jumped to my mind, but I was completely surprised with how much I fell in love with this story.
And on the subject of what Gothicpug mentioned: Abused children typically grow to either become abusive parents (mentally and/or physically), or do their damnedest to give their children what they could not have. It's a shame this puts my degree to more use than what I do for a living, haha.
At first I was hesitant because Mary Sue jumped to my mind, but I was completely surprised with how much I fell in love with this story.
And on the subject of what Gothicpug mentioned: Abused children typically grow to either become abusive parents (mentally and/or physically), or do their damnedest to give their children what they could not have. It's a shame this puts my degree to more use than what I do for a living, haha.
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June 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
...damn... and right before i go off to bed! and i love this chapter, i have a feeling that it's more of all filler but don't worry, i write those too.
keep up with the great work and update when you can and that even means if the chapter is quite short like this one...
keep up with the great work and update when you can and that even means if the chapter is quite short like this one...
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June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaay!!! Tony and Pepper (That was SS cute and so backwards, lol) !!! I'm so happy Syl made a friend. That's awesome.
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June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love it, Love it, LOVE IT!!! please update when ever you have the time!!!
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June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh man, that's awesome. I'm throughly enjoying this. Plus, Tony making cracks about Hammer's prison sentence make me giggle.....I'm SO ready to see what Tony learns/decides to do and the lovey-dovey couple.
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June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
aww, that's was so sweet! and my the effin time tony!!! and i'm happy that syl found a friend who is also struggling with a new language. update soon!!!
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June 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've read all of this so far, and I'd just like to say nice work! There are a few little grammar errors (aside from the intentional Russian ones) but nothing super major, and your word choice is some of the best I've seen on this site. :) I have to admit, I wasn't a fan of Ivan at first, but after I saw the movie, I grew to really like his character, and I think you do a great job writing him. :D
P.S. I -really- like the interaction between Tony and Pepper. Spot on!
P.S. I -really- like the interaction between Tony and Pepper. Spot on!
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June 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i'm happy that ivan got his real 'burd' back, and i hope that syl gets her kitty back too... ummm, another great chapter so please update soon!!!
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June 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Come on! I hate cliff hangers!