rate_review Reviews

Wow, this story is hot as hell! I wish I had found it sooner. I hope you haven't give up on it and will continue it soon.

...you said cyclops had a pussy........just so you are aware

I like the concept, though the narrative can get a little cluttered and confusing with so many characters thrown into the bunch. Coupled with some grammatical errors, it can get hard to understand in places. But the overall idea is nice, and the point gets across. Hot, hot, hot! What I would personally like to see is a Havok/Cyclops matchup. I just love that pairing, there's nothing like a little bromance. Alex and Scott have a special place in my heart, and I would love to see a chapter devoted to them. Maybe they get separated and end up by themselves? Would love to see younger Alex making his older bro his bitch, then maybe a flip flop? Just a personal preference. :)