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for One More Kiss For The Road

by jewle07974

person Serronas
schedule April 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So, I found this story earlier today and read the whole thing in one sitting. I'm an extremely picky person when it comes to fanfiction and I found yours to be enjoyable. Although, two years since your last update tells me that this story has long since been abandoned, I don't even know if you still look at your reviews anymore but it's worth a shot to post in my two cents.

I did feel like the plot was entirely centered around the sex. I admit I kept waiting for them to be exposed and the story to pick up, and to find that the story stopped one chapter before this story actually picked up was a little more than disheartening. Regardless of these issues, I still read the whole thing and am writing this to you. Regardless of whether of not you plan to continue this story, please send me an email (I provided mine above, assuming this site is willing to show it).
person Kirda
schedule February 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say I love both your stories!!!! I've never read a Pietro/Kurt fic before. Lets just say I've found a new love!!!!!!!!!!! Keep updating!!!!!
person JJay
schedule April 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
definately want an update on this one!!!
person Anon
schedule January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
can you please please please write the next chapter!! i am soooo into this story and i just need to know what happens next. this is the best x-men story i'ver ever read too!
person mistalis
schedule September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please write more, I have been waiting on this one. I truly love this story and want to keep seeing more.
schedule August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i discovered this site only recently and am hooked. i read this loooong wonderful story in one looooong night last week and i swear to go i got literally misty-eyed when they separated for that week and it almost killed them. you definitely have a seriously talent for capturing Nightcrawler and Silber (god i love that nickname!). this is really one of the best slash stories i've ever read. great plot, wonderfully almost prose-like angst, you really GET the emotions these 2 have...and the sex? wow, just wow. almost makes me wish i was a guy...ok, just an x-man LOL!

this and your lance/pietro/kurt 2some story are probably my fave x-slash of all time!
person FluffyPuppy
schedule July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your story it the best i have read in a long time!

Email me when you up date!
person kaino
schedule June 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please finish this story! I was amazed how I quickly become engrossed in the story and am dying to find out what’s next. Kudos to you!
person mistalis
schedule May 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hey really love this story, and I hope all is well with its wonderful writer. I cant wait to read more, please say a new post will be soon.
person CrulzLurker
schedule April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*raises hand* I wanna know I wanna know!!!

While I think that the boy have moved a little fast physically, you explain it greatly with the boys addressing it them selves. Overall I think this is a wonderful work and I'm wanting to find more Kurt/Pietro stories.

Keep up the good work.