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for Bend You, Break You, Make You Mine

by MyraThorne

schedule February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
James/Jimmy/Logan seems to have a fan club ^//^ I liked this last chapter, I can't wait to see more about this Romulus guy and James/Jimmy/Logan.
schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this has got to be one of the best written stories ever featuring these two characters! I'm very impressed with how you write the dynamic between Victor and Logan (or issit Jimmy??) and Victor's gradual success of breaking down Logan's mind.

A very good way of showing Logan's downfall is his reverting back to thinking of himself as "Jimmy" rather than Logan. I really hope to see more chapters posted soon.
schedule December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Jimmy, but he didn't seem to mind that part of the training.
schedule December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow....that Creed is so scary when you write him.