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Angst!? Why must there be angst!?

Also, I LOVE THIS! I can't imagine being penetrated like that, one after the other, but MAN, it's hot. Now, I must be off to clean my panties.

oh! yes more!!! more please! ^_^ I want there to be Kurt angst.

This is one of the best story of X-men that I have read!!!!! I can't wait untill the next chapter!!!!!! It is so exhilarating it always keeps me on my toes and wanting more!!!!!! I can’t wait and see some of your other works of art!!! Keep up the good work!!!!

I have blown through all 10 chapters and am happily awaiting more! I have loved it all so far, despite not being fond of the pairings. I'm one of those weird one's that have a fondness for the impossible pairing of Kurt/Todd. Anyway, I love how you have incorporated their powers into these situations as even in the show, they seem to often forget to use their powers on a day to day basis. I would love to see how they further implement some of Kurt's abilities such as his superhuman flexibility and the lack of a gag reflex that you implemented. Totally looking forward to reading more!

-Nic

wonderful wonderful wonderful! simply wonderful! And the sex was perfectly written. A few words were used to close to one another but other wise everything was well phrased. And I was just about to say you had set it up for some PERFECT angst when I saw your little note at the end lol. But as to what you said right before this chapter... I mean really.... what do you think they would do??? They are part of the brotherhood, not really favored all that much for being nice now are they? Getting Kurt drunk is frankly something they would do. Sure good honest people must feel the need to say nay! but its who they are and why we love them. They arent really bad, they're just human... ok so not so much human but you know what I mean. And everyday people have twisted little fantasy's like that, so why not them too? I mean after all they already want a threesome so who knows where the kinkyness ends :) lol. And yes it was a bit rushed time line wise but the way it was written it didn't feel rushed, you actually managed to make it feel drawn out. Bravo for that by the way. I'm sorry but when the writer not only makes it clear in the writing but adds author notes to make it even easier then there is no reason to say stuff about things that have already been covered. Well Im already looking forward to what you have in store for the next chapter. Keep up the great writing <3

Incredibly hot, and you've managed to resolve the emotional side of things for the time being. Well done. I'll be waiting for more.

Yeay! :)

This is undeniably hot. Good and slashy, with good character interaction and dialogue (though Kurt obviously isn't talking much).

One thing I'm worried about here, though, is that Kurt is basically being forced into things at a speed that he's not ready to handle. This is great for getting Lance and Pietro (and Kurt) off, but I don't see any way Kurt will be able to join their relationship in any lasting way. Especially not if they're planning on screwing him while he's drunk.

I know it would interrupt the pace of the sex you've got here, but if you want to redeem the emotional side of the story, here's an idea:

You might want to have Kurt break down in tears when he gets drunk and then have all three of them wind up doing a quick jerk (possibly Kurt doing self-service while watching Lance and Pietro if you want something new) and cuddling together. That way Kurt's mind has a chance to settle and adapt to them in a context that's not purely sexual.

This story has been coming along nicely, probably the best evo fic I've read.

:)

Nice!