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by KittyNin

schedule February 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM
more plz more
schedule June 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is an intriguing start; I hope you plan on finishing it.

I like the little I've seen of Scott and Logan's relationship and the real and deep feelings Remy has picked up on between them. I'm glad they're both looking out for Remy and hope they will give him the positive emotions he needs to pull himself out of his miserable loneliness.

Laura.
person Ruka
schedule December 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read (and believe me I've red tons!)

please continue this!
person CeeCee
schedule February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
...did I not review this here? Goodness gracious, what's wrong with me?

I'm craving an update to this. Myriad reasons spring to mind, not least of which is that cuddling bit between Remy and Scott, when Logan looks in on the two of them. That was yummy. Poor Remy was cold, he needed someone to wrap themselves around him and keep him toasty... *evil grin*.

But I enjoy this fic. I love the friendship and relationship dynamics and the fact that Remy isn't too weepy. I've occasionally made him that way myself, particularly in the two post-Antarctica fics that I have, so my hat is off to you for doing what I couldn't. Good stuff.
person Vylet
schedule January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see more of this story line. Really sucked me in!
schedule November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You've got a good start here... It's a bit early in the story for me to come up with any sort of a good title, but the one that springs to mind at the moment is "Wayward".

Excellent touches here, especially the little bits of tenderness between the guys. Just make sure you don't make them TOO sweet; they're still the X-Men.