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OH MY GOSH CHAP 9 WAS THE MOST HORRIFIC AND CRAZY THING I HAVE EVER READ THE SCENE JUST JUMP OFF THE PAGE I WAS FREAZKING BLOWN OUT OF MY MIND WHEN I PASSED THE WARNING I MEAN THIS WAS JUST I MEAN DAMN YOUR ARE ONE TALENTED MOFO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey there! I have just found this amazing story and I've read all chapters in one go! I'm loving it, it is so well written... please keep going!

Do you know the RoLo Realm? It's an archive of Logan and Ororo fics! I haven't seem you around there so I thought I should give the fans here a heads up! :)

http://thehookupzone.net/RoLoRealm/index.php

Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.

I just can't wait until the next chapter! I really love this pairing! Ororo/Logan! they mean a lot to me!
you've got lots of love from Africa! (I was born Cameroonian) please keep going!!!

I'm trying to write a story on my own involving Logan (No More Tears) I'd be glad if he pleases you as much as he pleases me ^^ (not saying I'm portraying the best Logan of all times lol)

Well so far I am enjoying your story. I never understood why Wolverine was so frickin hung on Jean Gray, especially when Storm was right there. I like this pairing better. I started reading it yesterday and finished what is there today. Umm... The story itself is a pretty enjoyable read: there are the usual dynamics, the characters arent crazy messed up like I have seen in some versions, the way you tied off his obsessive fascination with Jean was good, no chance of a reconcilliation on that front. It was a fast read, for me there is nothing worse than trying read a story that is like walking through syrup. The scene with Sabertooth was disturbing, as all things of that nature are, but as it didnt last that long it was bearable. The only thing was that at a few points it got really fluffy and like a romance novel. That could just be the cynical side of me reacting I dont know. All in all I enjoyed the story and will be checking back for the rest of it.

It's so sad what happened to Ororo. And poor Logan...... I really hope the story takes a turn for the better soon i'm not sure how much more i can take. You write very well by the way which unfortunately isn't reflected in the number of reviews you've gotten for the story. In my personal opinion you might get more if you allowed people to review without being logged in. Update soon. Happy writings.

Please update soon can not wait to see what the Professor's plan is to help them

I have been really enjoying this story, checking regularly for your updates. Please update soon.

Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Really enjoying this story, please make sure to finish it.