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by XiaCheyenne

person modiggy
schedule December 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope Logan KILLS Creed. He needs to die a slow and VERY painful death!
person modiggy
schedule December 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this fic. I am in love with Logan and Ororo getting together. Wonderful!
person modiggy
schedule December 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love it!! The kisses, I can't wait for them to do the do!!
person Awed
schedule July 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YOu have a very lovely writing style and I can't wait for another update!
I'm new to the site and was wondering how exactly will I know when a story is updated?
person MWhite01
schedule November 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I could kick myself for forgetting to check for an update on his story!! I am so glad that I finally remembered!! This has been a wonderful story thanks so much for sharing it with us. I love how you left it open ended. I truly hope you will continue it some day. Great job!!
person VICTORIA
schedule November 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow i just can't believe that this story has come to an end and i must say that this story was completly flawless and so beautiful written wow as always evil was lurking even in on logan and ororo tranquility and peace and another mutant with blades in the hand is this one of stryker sick creation with logan dna man why oh why did that skank mystique get away with the testing vials ohh i just know by the way you ended it that their is going to be a sequal and i for one can't wait!!!!!!!!!!!!Thank you soo much and also a huge thank you to your beta Mertz!!!!!!! Just wonderful spectacular work.....................Forever a Fan: Victoria
person dispatcher652
schedule November 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best Logan/Ororo stories I have ever read. It completely blew me away by how well written it was. I was emotional involved in the characters and each chapter had me wanting to read more to make sure they were ok. I absolutely loved your Logan and Ororo relationship. You could feel the connection you created for them. I was rooting for them and was so glad how things turned out with them in the end. Although, it does look like you left room for a part two.
I hope to see a sequel from you.
schedule November 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I kept checking back to see if you updated and when I saw you did I was so elated! You are an amazing writer and I have to agree with one of the other reviewers... it does seem like you left room for a part two! (I could be just secretly hoping you would continue...!) Anyway thanks for this story!~
person VICTORIA
schedule November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
BRAVO, BRAVO THIS STORY IS ON ANOTHER LEVEL OF WRITING, WHOO WHAT CAN ISAY THE LOVE THAT YOU WRITE BETWEN ORORO AND LOGAN COMPLETELY BLOWS MY MIND. I AM SO OVERJOYED TO SEE AN UPDATE WOW WOW THERE ARE SO MANY THINGS I WANT TO SAY ABOUT THIS FANTASTIC STORY BUT I AM JUST SPEECHLESS JUST WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT THIS IS ONE OF THE MOST WONDERFUL, FANTASTIC STORY I HAVE EVER READ AND TRUST I HAVE READ THOUSANDS BUT NONE QUITE LIKE THIS AND I WOULD JUST LIKE TO THANK YOU FOR ALL YOUR HARD WORK BECAUSE THIS STORY IS SIMPLY FLAWLESS SO THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOOKING FOWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER AND I HOPE THAT YOU CONTINUE TO WRITE MORE STORIES FOR THIS COUPLE BECAUSE YOU ARE AN OUT OF THIS UNIVERSE AUTHOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really good can't wait for you to continue!