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for Lock Of Hair

by Siren5864

person vera f
schedule September 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
god, that was lovely. really sad and really funny and so very logan.
person Stacy
schedule December 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful!
person Sev
schedule December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. The ending nearly made me cry and that happens pretty much never for me. Thank you for this.
person Jenny
schedule November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! I hope you write more Logan stories like this one! You do really good with his vocab btw
person Anon
schedule November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was hoping someone would make a story based off of the lock of hair incident in the comics! This was great!
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have a sweet spot for tender, warm Logan/Jean. And this really was good. Yes, a little on the sappy side but that was kind of the whole damn point. Logan was warm and tender and strong yet woobie-ish and hurt... and you DIDN'T make him a brute or rapist or anything like that. So yes, you absolutely succeeded at tender, warm Logan. Well written too, captured his perspective very nicely. The sex was nice too, it was tasteful and passionate and romantic.

So yes, I liked this!
person Ingonyama
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have never read a Logan/Jean story that was so believable, so in-character for both of them.

I'm polyamorous, and as such will always be a solid Scott/Jean/Logan shipper, but during New X-Men I felt the same serious dislike for One-Eye that seemed to become universal. He's redeemed himself since then in my eyes, but that period would have been the perfect time to finally set the Redship sailing. I just wish that had been the way they'd gone instead of...well.
person MeyK
schedule October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! Thanks for touching on the lock of hair issue. You have a great way of expressing Logan's feelings and his feral nature, and when you put him and Jean together...hot damn. Please keep writing more!