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August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Please don't let this story end soon.
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August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow.... AWESOME chapter!!!! I was gonna be SO upset if Kelly died, leaving Victor alone! His reactions are so well described & to the point; very Victor! Please update soon!!! n_n
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August 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing!! You continue to impress me more with every new chapter.
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August 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is without a doubt one of the most touching stories I have ever read. I can feel myself experiencing the emotions as the characters themselves do. I feel as if I am Victor Creed and am a part of his world. This last chapter brought tears to my eyes. More, more, more. This story is so amazing don't stop your work this is truly wonderful and I just cant get enough.
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August 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading the last chapter and I TOTALLY love it. The characters are so well written and the plot is just breath taking. You are an awesome writer. Good fortune and keep up with the great work!!! :)
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August 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yea! Update!
wow, almost made me tear up during that last scene. And you most definatly did justice to the x-men and that whole awkward scene. Dont worry, your an awesome writer!
Please dont make us wait so long for the next chapter...I checked this one daily and actually felt a pain every time I saw the number 20 on chapters. Please please...be merciful and write?
wow, almost made me tear up during that last scene. And you most definatly did justice to the x-men and that whole awkward scene. Dont worry, your an awesome writer!
Please dont make us wait so long for the next chapter...I checked this one daily and actually felt a pain every time I saw the number 20 on chapters. Please please...be merciful and write?
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August 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Finally... I've been waiting for you to update! Your story is one of my favorites on the site. So Kelly is a mutant now! Update again as soon as you can!
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August 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter, not dissapointed at all! However, I have a question!!! And it involves another "M" word. Kelly and Victor don't use condoms, and they have sex all the time. Obviously, after the beating Kelly sustained, a pregnancy would have miscarried, but is Kelly ever going to be an unexpected Mommy? Just wondering, since our fantastic duo don't have any type of birth control going on. Can't wait for the next chapter!!! <3
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August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ok now...a whole month?? it's never been a whole month before! It's usually almost-a-whole month! I was really sad when I looked on the 5th and it still wasn't there :(
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August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Not to be a nag....but its been a month of pain, agony, and wild dreams. Dead honest, I have dreamt about your story. Please update soon!