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January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful as always!! Please update soon!
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January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is fucking exquisite. I'm on chapter 13 and I'm gonna oversleep my alarm tomorrow because I can't stop reading it. The idea of "redemption", even just a little bit, is always tricky, potentially awful territory- you have gracefully stepped over all of the hurdles normally associated with it. I don't feel like Victor has stepped out of character a single time, and for the first time in a long time, the original lead female is INTERESTING. That's shocking in and of itself.
Oh, and you can build sexual tension like nobody's business. From one writer to another, let me tip my hat to you- this is a masterful job well done, and I'm loving every bit of it.
Oh, and you can build sexual tension like nobody's business. From one writer to another, let me tip my hat to you- this is a masterful job well done, and I'm loving every bit of it.
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January 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really didn't expect Kelly to react this way. I guess her innocence is finally gone (not a good sign). I LOVE this plot twist.
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January 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have just started reading and to be honest I didn't think I was going to like it, but I found I was pleasantly surprised and I love it!!!
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December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AN UPDATE!!! :D
It was just as amazing as all your other chapters hunn, I truly loved this one and I think your writing is fantastic!!
i hope we get another amazing update again soon :) And don't feel too bad if "real life" get's in the way, I think everyone understands. That is one of the reasons why we write; to escape "real life" ;) and it's a lot of fun :D
Update soon and I hope 'real life' isn't dragging you down too much, I truly know how it can pull you into the abyss.
:)
It was just as amazing as all your other chapters hunn, I truly loved this one and I think your writing is fantastic!!
i hope we get another amazing update again soon :) And don't feel too bad if "real life" get's in the way, I think everyone understands. That is one of the reasons why we write; to escape "real life" ;) and it's a lot of fun :D
Update soon and I hope 'real life' isn't dragging you down too much, I truly know how it can pull you into the abyss.
:)
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December 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating!! I'm like a junkie and your story is my "fix". Have read it three times now, and it is definitely on my top ten favorite stories ever. I seriously love Victor's inner monologue-- "you'll wake up in the morning"-- has me in stitches every time I read them. You are an amazing writer and I can't wait for the next installment.
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November 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is a freakin awesome story. I hope you continue and finish. Love your writing
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October 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING!! as usual, I've already read the update twice. I am mad that it took so long!!! I almost given up on checking for updates, it was sad :(
Do I smell foreshadowing?? there was a line in there that seemed to imply that Conlon might come to an abrupt end soon. Personally, I think it was him that ratted them out. But that's just my theory.\
update soon!!! please!
Do I smell foreshadowing?? there was a line in there that seemed to imply that Conlon might come to an abrupt end soon. Personally, I think it was him that ratted them out. But that's just my theory.\
update soon!!! please!
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October 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome as usual! I really like this story!
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October 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The update made my day, nay my week, I've had a darn rough and tumble one and just happened to click over to see if you had an update! And it did not dissapoint!
Waiting on pins and needles for your next update!!
Waiting on pins and needles for your next update!!