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September 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE this fic!! it's so well done! I love how you characterized Creed and how u keep on referring him as creed. made him sounds bad ass but it melts my heart that he's so "sweet" (or freakin' hot) to kelly. i love how he's good and cuddly as a bear but he's still a bear and he can and will rip your guts out. and i love how "frail" is like an endearment and i love how the characters developed. i really over used the word love but damn....i don't have a better word for describing what i feel for this. keep it up hun....i'm so glad i stumbled upon this! you totally made my day and made the hours i spend reading your fic when i should be studying for my midterm SO TOTALLY WORTH IT!!
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September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great update! Can't wait to read the next one.
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September 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. This whole story is so well written. When Kelly started to slip I started crying, I was sure you were going to kill her off. I love it. :3
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September 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i've seen this story on the site before, and as much as i like victor, i hadn't given it a try yet. i am so glad i did! started yesterday, just finished it, and i love it. please keep it up! it is obvious how much time and work you have put into this. it will drive me crazy if you end up not finishing it. there are a few other stories around here that i love but they just sort of drop off after the first or second act, and i want to know what happens. again, i love your story, and i can't wait to see an update. :)
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August 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dear psyche b. mused,
I wish that the rating system went to eleven, because your story is one louder!
In other words, it's simply brilliantly breathtaking. The plot has had me on the edge of the seat of my pants since somewhere near the beginning, and I can't wait to see how everything unravels! Please continue to be fantastically stupendous! My breath is already bated for the next chapter.
With much encouraging love,
TopShelf
I wish that the rating system went to eleven, because your story is one louder!
In other words, it's simply brilliantly breathtaking. The plot has had me on the edge of the seat of my pants since somewhere near the beginning, and I can't wait to see how everything unravels! Please continue to be fantastically stupendous! My breath is already bated for the next chapter.
With much encouraging love,
TopShelf
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July 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I have not been this impressed with a piece of fanfiction writing in a very long time. This is a supremely awesome work. And it is totally addicting! I couldn't even stop reading it and I would never have thought to read a Victor Creed/Sabertooth fiction either. Your writing style is very clear and the plot is really well developed and captivating. Thank you so much for writing this work and I can't wait to read the rest. Thank you!
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June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dear psyche b. mused,
I am a very new member of AFF, and I wanted the very first thing that I did on this site to be reviewing your story. In fact, I joined the site with the sole purpose of writing this review.
While I only recently stumbled upon this site and, subsequently, your story, I am no stranger to fanfiction. But never before have I been so enthralled with such a masterful work of art. No words could truly express how delighted I am with your story, nor how wonderful you must be to be able to write it as well as you do.
Not only is the storyline engaging, the characters well written and captivating, but there is a certain something else that I can't quite put my finger on that has me completely hooked and ready for more.
Though I'm sure that a writer that is as obviously as talented as you must have many fans and admirers, you can count one more among them. I will be waiting patiently but with great expectation for the next chapter, and will probably write another review about how marvelously entrancing it is.
And if you think that all my flowery compliments are too over the top, clearly you need to read your own writing.
Much expectant love,
TopShelf
I am a very new member of AFF, and I wanted the very first thing that I did on this site to be reviewing your story. In fact, I joined the site with the sole purpose of writing this review.
While I only recently stumbled upon this site and, subsequently, your story, I am no stranger to fanfiction. But never before have I been so enthralled with such a masterful work of art. No words could truly express how delighted I am with your story, nor how wonderful you must be to be able to write it as well as you do.
Not only is the storyline engaging, the characters well written and captivating, but there is a certain something else that I can't quite put my finger on that has me completely hooked and ready for more.
Though I'm sure that a writer that is as obviously as talented as you must have many fans and admirers, you can count one more among them. I will be waiting patiently but with great expectation for the next chapter, and will probably write another review about how marvelously entrancing it is.
And if you think that all my flowery compliments are too over the top, clearly you need to read your own writing.
Much expectant love,
TopShelf
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May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story! I love how you keep Victor as the vicious animal that he is, it makes the story so much more real to me. <3 Keep writing, I wanna know what happens next!
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May 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG i was SO excited when i saw there was a new chapter! every time i'm blown away by your writing style and how you are able to keep true to the characters. i can't wait to find out what happens with her brother and mother! simply amazing, my favorite story!
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May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU for the update. Holy begeezes I was happy to see that little '26'. Lovely writing of course, but by now I dont think your ego for writing needs much stroking. You have a cult fanbase watching your AFF account like hawks! :) Hope yer life is going well and you can keep the writing flowing!