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DUN DUNN DUUUNNNNN....... woo! awesome chapter... but now I'm thinking.. who the fuck is Joe Demmer?? (did I read about him in an earlier chapter and totally spaced or what? :S)

still can't wait for the next chapter! squea!! so excited :D

yaaaay!!!! omg, it took me a long time to read this.. no sleep, no food and just work is frikin hard! XD lol 'nough about me though, I Frikin' LOVED this chapter :D I really liked Victor in it, a complete asshole, but still somewhat sensitive :) And Kelly... wow, I feel bad for that girl... we're finally able to see some of the other hardships she's had to endure because of fuckface Stan XD

lol, well, I really hope we get another update out of you soon!!!

Adore this story adore Kelley and I think you capture Victor extremely well. You stick to him as a character and not once have I found him to be OOC in any way. He is experiencing human emotion yet the animal in him is still there. I love how one moment he is considering snapping her neck and the next he is cuddling her. Your grammar is extremely good as well as you writing in general. Have to say I love the steamy scenes between both of them, very erotic and appealing. Keep up the great work I am so happy I came across this fic and hope to see it to the very end.

Interesting, so she's like Creed with powers? That bastard Stan, Creed can't kill him soon enough.

I loved this chapter, we're really starting to see Victors' other sides, like why he's so sick and twisted. This was an amazing chapter! I can't beleive he was starting to think about killing her though... kinda thought he was gonna try harder to make himself though... lol it's getting exciting now too, what with her brother going to be involved, and Stan being a total douch.... lol
Well, I really hope you update again really soon, I can't wait for the next chapter. :)

Woot! Another chapter! When you upload its like Christmas! Wonderfully written, as always, and I love the slight humanization of Victor, just a little, not too much! The plot is coming along wonderfully and I can't wait until you write and upload again!

-Holly

{P.S. Only thing that bugged me was that little glitch that made the rest of the 'fic all in italics, but thats just the weird in me. ;) }

Another great chapter; I really love reading this story.

Your characterization of Victor is still excellent, and you tread that fine line between soft and vicious as masterfully as ever.

I'm always quite impressed with your work, and so I'll leave you with a request for more of the same.

Oh, and a request for you to check out story if you're at all into Kurt stuff that's not fluffy.

Creed is very scary, especially the way you write him. I was worried that he was actually going to kill her for a moment. I always get so excited when you update, because I never know what to expect in the chapters.

I am ADDICTED to this story! You capture Victor's personality perfectly, and your characters are wonderfully developed. Please don't stop writing!

This is an awesome fanfiction! I love the way you portray Victor, and I love the smut! You walk the line between pain and pleasure so perfectly! I await the next chapter with bated breath!