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What happened? Where did you go? I have been waiting with rapt anticipation for the next chapter.

Please for the love of god dont stop writing this. And when your done, watch origin repeatedly until your inspired to write more of Creed. I think this is the best and most compelling view of him I have read, and the dreams this story has given me over the past few days are amazing.
Your wonderful, I hope you dont stop writing. Im off to read your other fics now while I wait for an update on this one.

This story honestly keeps getting better. Your characterization is spot-on, and you've managed to regain Victor's edge while making it clear that he's feeling something. The plot looks to be rather elaborate, and I can't wait to see how it all unfolds.

As always, excellent work, and please continue.

Okay, I just finished the last chapter posted, and now I'm utterly hooked. I'm actually toying with a Sabey tale of my own, the blonde comic book version, but I've been eating up your story when I should have been working on my own. Your grasp of all of these characters, from Victor all the way down to the waitresses, even people like Kelly's father who only appears post-mortem, is flawless and downright spellbinding. Victor is stunning and haunting, and so excellently rendered here that I can hear Liev speaking your dialogue in my head! One thing I'd like to suggest: could you mention at the outset that it's the grandfather Joe teaching Kelly to shoot at first? I thought it was Victor initially, then realized it didn't sound like Victor. I'm now going to be one of those readers who checks back each day to see if you've updated a new chapter. I hope new chapters will be soon, quite verbose, and many in number? As far as I'm concerned, this is the best portrayal of Victor I've yet found in the world of fan fiction, and I'd be happy if it never wrapped up to an ending. Big thanks for this! - Anon

Found this when you already had 14 chapters posted, and found it quite 'un-put-down-able'. Really looking forward to finding out where you are taking this. Nice characterisation of Victor - a good blend between the impulsive wild side and the controlled professional assassin. I've never bought the idea that Sabretooth could do that job effectively if he were really the mindless savage portrayed in the movies. The little hints that the 'frail' is slightly more than she appears (the lack of scarring) are intriguing, and I'm watching to see where you take that. You've introduced the mutant Conlon - are we going to find out what his abilities are, or is he just a convenient 'throw-away' character? Awaiting the onging developments with interest! 'Purr

I am addicted to this story. You ABSOLUTELY have to keep going with it!!! I love it!!!!

Okay! Awesome Sabey goodness here! I just discovered this story last night, and I'm only up to finishing chapter 4; but I will read more as soon as I can and review again later. Liev Schreiber is delicious as Victor, and you are writing him brilliantly in this tale. I like your OC, Kelly, too; she is quite believable. Some might say she gets hot over Victor a bit quickly, especially for a virgin, but I can't personally blame her! However, you did that well, too, by showing that she is confused about how she feels, and seems unable to help it. Victor does seem just a touch "too nice" here and there, but then again, I like him pretty brutal; you did explain that well, too, though with the information that he'd been regaining some humanity lately.

Here and there, a Beta would help, but to answer your question in one of the Author's Notes, no, it's not enough to distract much from the story. Technically, your grasp of grammar is in the top end of the scale. Overall, I'm really impressed and enjoying the heck out of this. Thanks for sharing! I have to go sit in a car dealership tomorrow morning, and I plan to pass the time with your story on my BlackBerry. - Anon

PS: Your profile says you like Hellraiser; have you seen mine on AFF? The title is "Hellraiser: Beyond Elysium". I'd love to know what you think; since you can write Victor gruesome, you'd be a good judge of my gruesome. LOL.

I am loving this story! I've always had a thing for Wolverine but you make Sabes sound pretty tasty!
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Aww is it twisted that I found the end of that chapter so endering ^.^ ? I hope not lol. Keep up the great writing <3!!!!!

OOOMMMMGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU TOOK FRIKIN' FOREVER TO UPDATE, IT WAS ALMOST A MONTH!!! I THOUGHT YOU WERE GONNA STOP WITH THE STORY :'(

But yaaaaa!!! updated :3


Good chapter too btw, nice and long
Kinda surprised that Victor would go that far to get information from Kelly....