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Yay! Two chapters added! Kudos on the wonderful gritty gruesomeness in chapter 16, too. Also, I watch and read a LOT about forensics, and you are right on the money. As for the rest of the update goodness, are you sure you aren't a psychology major? Thank you, thank you, thank you! - Anon

I am completely hooked on this story. I love how you've gotten into Creed's mind and made him more than the mindless feral a lot of authors (comic and fanfic) choose to portray. You've managed to keep the psychopathic side of him intact and yet realistically introduce more humanity into his character with his growing attachment to Kelly. I like that he is confused and angered by his feelings for her--that seems a very realistic reaction to me. I also like Kelly as a character. She's in a difficult position--she knows she's being hunted by Stan and that the only place she's safe from him is with Creed, but she's also not safe from Creed. I can see how her years of emotional abuse would allow her to accept his roughness and crudeness as okay, especially since despite how he treats her, in some ways he's better to her than anyone else has been. I can see a couple of possibilities of where their relationship might go, so I can't wait to see what you do with it. Thanks for updating!

This is an amazing story. I have never been very drawn to the Sabertooth character, I have always been a Wolverine fan. However, I love this story. My girl and I have read this story all the way through and become giddy when updates come up. Love it love it. I am amazed at who in depth you can describe the beastial nature of this man and yet still express the sides of all of the other characters. Wonderful, I sincerly and with still breath await the next chapter. As for the conclusion I am sure you will not dissapoint.

Great story. Love it. Please update as soon as possible/whenever you can. :DD

whoooaaaa...... over a month, can't believe that...

pretty good chapter though :D definitely worth the wait :)

I really really hope it doesn't take another month for an update though, I'm too impatient for that :P

Well, I do really hope for another update (super speedy quick!!) lol, and I can't wait to find out what happens in it :) you're story is absolutely fantastic, and I really don't want it to end now...

Awesome story! I love the characterization and the perfect grammer. A couple of things though: why is it always one chaper ahead on fanfiction.net? That confuses me. Also, I've never heard of hypnocyn and nothing came up for it in a google search. Did you make it up or am I just googling it wrong? Anyways, awesome story, I love it, update soon!

Arrrrrgggg! Ok, you win. I'm slowly but surely becoming attached to this story. Victor is fabulous, and Kelly is, well, Kelly I suppose. Eh, it takes all types. She's no heroine but whateves; I just hope no young girl aspires to be her. Right? Right, young girls reading this out there on the web that shouldn't even be snooping around on such a site? Right. So. Carry on :)

Great update!

This is a delicious story. I love Victor and I love how he calls Kelly Frail all the time. I hope she get's pregnant and he then has to learn how to be a father. I like the way you write Victor. It's perfect actually. You show his soft spots which he definitely has but you also show that he is an animal trying to control the animal within himself. It's really amazing. I actually think you write him better then what he was in the Wolverine movie. I love love love this story. Please update as soon as you can.

I think this is a wonderful story and I hope you continue with it! I love the sadistic and conflicted Victor Creed you describe.