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Dear God, I don't know how you do it. Your writing is honestly more compelling, suspenseful, and all-around enjoyable than a good number of (published) authors I've read. You interweave plot, violence, sex, and humor with a mastery that is beyond my aspirations, and you've managed to continue it throughout nearly 100,000 words (based off of the FF count; don't know about AFF and I'm way too lazy to copy and paste this all to check word count). I honestly can't say enough about how well you combine so many different elements, but I do want to give you kudos for the "wheat grass and tree bark and them green things that grow under boats" line; you had me chuckling for quite a while there.

Keep up the amazing work!

Aaaaaaaaah! New Chapter shock! I was checking something else in here, and there it was! I got a new job, started today, but couldn't wait until I got home to read, so I read it in the ladies room during lunch and then I had to gulp my lunch at my desk! Yeah, it's that important. Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! - Anon

awesome update, as usual. I'm glad it didn't take forever this time, it's sad when it does! It's summer now though so I anticipate more frequent updates :)

:O WTF?!?!?!?!?!!? uuurrrrrrgggggghhhhhh!!!! CLIFFY!! >:(

you better update soon, i don't want to have to wait another month to find out!!! -cries-

amazing chapter though, of course :)

I completely understand the concept of an update taking some time, I take too long to update mine as it is, but it was still torture waiting to read more of this story. At the same time, your talent is so good, the story so enjoyable, that I always feel the new chapters are worth the wait. I dread getting to the end of one, knowing it's over so fast and then I have to wait for more again, but I've also just started from the beginning more than once and just re-read it all when I need a fix. I'm still hearing Liev's growling voice in your Victor dialogue, which is a rare treat. The way you portray him is utterly sublime. For me, since I'm writing my own tales, including a canon comics version of Victor, the best treat is that I can read a high quality Victor story and I don't already know what is going to happen! Quite a rare treat, actually, and thank you so much for making it possible. - Anon

I love this story. It's enveloping. It has everything, danger, gore, fluff. 's perfect. Can't wait till the next chapter. Also love the constant inward battle of Victor, the man and the beast, Creed. Keep writing and I'll start reviewing from now on.

I have to say that this is a very pleasant surprise to read. Victor's character was exactly the way he appears and acts in the movie, not doing a single thing out of character. This is no fairy tale, but the only way I can interpret Kelly's actions is that she loves him. Every little detail of their most intimate moments was described with absolute precision and care(It got me really hot in some places), and I bet that if we put the rest of the content aside is the best quality of this work. Realism is the way to go for you, because every word, start to finish was completely believable, and the hooker part almost had me crying, and I was cringing. To be taken away just because you look a certain way scared me, but that's the whole point of Victor being himself. This story has the quality of a bestselling novel, and I wouldn't be surprised if this ends up in a movie. I simply adore it, and I wish the world a lot more writers like yourself. Bravo!

Oh, and excuse my bad English. I'm not even sure that I said everything I have on my mind right now

Sorry I've been away for so long... I'm always glad to come back and find chapters of this waiting, though.

First off, the Feral Godfather crack had me laughing harder than I have from a fic in a long time. Secondly, I enjoy the fact that Victor is still willing to hurt Kelly when necessary (a la the previous chapter), so he's not completely soft, even with her. Good balance.

Thirdly, on to the next chapter!

Another chapter of classic Creed. I'm enthralled, as usual.

What a twisted chapter that was.... You what the weird part is though? When you're not in any pain or anything, reading about someone (or watching) who has the shit beaten out of them or they're being tortured doesn't make you feel THEIR pain if you know what I mean, but when you ARE in pain from something else, anyone else's pain makes you hurt more...

lol so in other words, i just had minor surgery on my foot, and reading this made it throb really badly! XD

But excellent chapter, I still really enjoyed it :) Hope we get another quick update outta ya :)