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July 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME i truly have loved this story since the beginning cant wait to see what happens next and definitely want to see and update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
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April 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I know the fic hasn't been updated in years, but I was hoping you'd get back to it. I'd really want to see the Professor banishing the harlot and the monster from not only the team, but the Institute as well, as neither can be trusted again, by any stretch of the Human imagination. And to add further insult to Jean's injury, Scott should take Rogue right in front of her. Rogue wouldn't complain, and Scott knows that unlike Jean, she can be trusted. Hell, Scott and Rogue could actually have a very good relationship. Just give Rogue a bracelet that, when active, inhibits her powers; she'd be good to go after that.
Or, here's another idea: How about bringing in either Betsy or Emma for Scott to get together with? Being two of the world's most powerful telepaths themselves would really stick in Jean's craw, especially if he hooked up with Betsy, who, like Jean, is also telekinetic. And Jean would have absolutely nobody on the planet to blame but herself. She should be made to realize that too late. It'd be an apt form of revenge, and Scott could possibly gain a very good and rewarding relationship out of it, as well. Win-win situation.
Or, here's another idea: How about bringing in either Betsy or Emma for Scott to get together with? Being two of the world's most powerful telepaths themselves would really stick in Jean's craw, especially if he hooked up with Betsy, who, like Jean, is also telekinetic. And Jean would have absolutely nobody on the planet to blame but herself. She should be made to realize that too late. It'd be an apt form of revenge, and Scott could possibly gain a very good and rewarding relationship out of it, as well. Win-win situation.
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July 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well... That's one way to let everyone know you're involved with someone... I couldn't contain my grin when Kitty started looking at her website as I KNEW where you were going with that. Despite knowing, I still laughed my ass off when I read that part. It was hilarious!
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April 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG! YOu can't just leave the story there! you have to finish it! Please??
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April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is fabulous! Please,you must update soon!
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January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Guh! This is an amazing fic! Love the sizzle between those two! More please!
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December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE SOON! I want to know what the professor has got to say!
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December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great, keep it up
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November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it.
To tell the truth, I've been dying for some new, good Redship for the longest time. You've answered! Thank you. Anyway, Jean's aggressiveness and Logan's guilty reluctance – you've reversed their roles. And I agree, it works with Evo-Jean. The sex scenes and the dirty talk are, ahem, nice too (the latter isn't overdone either, it sounds wanton but not over the top, IMO). Mind you, I'm late to reviewing this, so this is for chapter two; I'll work up to your latest chapters.
Keep it up!
To tell the truth, I've been dying for some new, good Redship for the longest time. You've answered! Thank you. Anyway, Jean's aggressiveness and Logan's guilty reluctance – you've reversed their roles. And I agree, it works with Evo-Jean. The sex scenes and the dirty talk are, ahem, nice too (the latter isn't overdone either, it sounds wanton but not over the top, IMO). Mind you, I'm late to reviewing this, so this is for chapter two; I'll work up to your latest chapters.
Keep it up!
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November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it! Can't wait for more!