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for The Deal

by Siren5864

person Katy
schedule March 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG PLEASEEE PDATE THIS STORY!!!!
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is fantastic! Honestly, there's not enough Logan/Jean fics out there. Love this!!!

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person Alyssa
schedule December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Im so glad you decided to continue this story. Youve done a really great job. I hope its not almost done! And I hope you update again soon.
person Tina
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really am in love with this story. One of the best stories out there. Hope yo can update this soon.
person Cassie
schedule December 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You seriously need to update this story again soon. I want to see how the whole fight was resolved. I really liked the last 2 chapters if you couldnt tell.
person Jenny
schedule November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to continue the story? I hope you do!
person DevilRebel
schedule November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
friggin' awsome!!! keep it up
person DevilRebel
schedule November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well, now that family portrait story makes more sense. aswome by the way
person TVO
schedule November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is so much fun, glad to see you've continued it. However it would be nice if you continued the Logan/Jean X-men Evolution story you are doing as well ;) .

I like where this is going, but I also like that in the epilogue we already know it ends well. The scenes with Logan and Jean are very well done and passionate. I'm not particularly a Jean/Logan shipper (sort of got tired of it), but you definitely create a good attraction and dynamic between them where I can buy into it and enjoy it. Also like that Jean is worried about Logan at the end.
person TVO
schedule November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So much fun from start to finish. I really enjoyed the dialogue and the banter between Emma and Jean. So glad it ultimately worked out. The scenes with Logan and Jean together were amazing. SUPER CRAZY REGENERATIVE SPERM THAT DOES NOT QUIT! Awesome.