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I hope this story will be continued, because it's stopped on a real cliffhanger! Can Victor really be saved? Can things ever be mended between him and Logan, him and Remy?

Laura.

Terrific! The tension and the action were spot on in this chapter. Betsy was a complete bad-ass. If it weren't for Remy,she'd surely would have let Victor burn. This has cranked up my anticipation for the next chapter. I definitely want to see how or if they can help Victor who is so lost in his rage and demons.

This is an amazing chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next. This is just the beginning.

I'm going to take it for granted that the reader is suppose the ignore the last part of chapter 12 with Logan in the hospital. Victor seems to have done a turn around in this chapter. Although it's kinda understandable since his personality is probably gonna have to be a helluva lot more palatable to ever get within spitting distance of a conscious Remy or Logan. Though the 'tag your it' note is just begging for a beating.
I kind of liked that you pushed past Vic's surface emotions of hate,cynicism, and blood-lust to show that he can have truer feelings. Amazing how jealously of someone's love and happiness can twist even Victor Creed. I would really enjoy seeing where you go with the rest of this story.

Wow! It's wonderful to see this story updated. You didn't miss a beat with this chapter. The characterizations were crisp and believable. Victor doesn't learn easily but it seems Gambit is ready to up the ante to stop him. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Wow! This is a great story. I can hardly believe parts of the story were written by a different author. You and Original Ceenote play so well off each other;it's like the story was written by one author.
You both have a strong grasp of the characters voice. The actions that happen in the story seem very in tune with how they would react in and to those situations;very believable.
I am enjoying how you are interweaving Logan's flashbacks with his Orgins story. I hope that Remy and Logan can make it once it's revealed to what extent their relationships extended with Victor. I am looking forward to seeing where you take this story.

The story moves kind of quick. Slow down a bit when you get to the poignant parts and really describe what the characters are feeling. I like the fact that you have let this story open to be changed by other writers. Adds a bit of flare!

Hi, Roe! *waves*

is this a round robin? what do you have planned for it so far?

I like that you have Victor's usual misogyny intact; his victims are usually female, so it's nice to see that consistency. I love Victor fic. Can't wait to see what you do with this next.