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Yea! I can review now! Thank you for another update for this wonderful story. I can definately see James going to Victor to 'let off some steam/anguish.' Great job overall! Please update once more when you have the chance.

Wow, I have to say I really enjoyed this story and hope that you continue it because I would love to see where this goes. And I must that you really made me laugh and turned my bad mood around (the hard gore porn helped too), so thank you.

keep going!! :D

I have to say, that was some pretty piss poor story development, please edit and re post these last two chapters. Don't feel pressured to update when you are not inspired or are out of ideas. Just post when you are ready and have a clear plan in mind. Thank you.

Yea! I can review the story now. -grins- I love visualizer James/Logan and Vicktor as teenagers, especially Victor/Sabertooth for some reason....perhaps b/c he hasn't been portrayed as one very often? Who knows. Anyways, good job with the story over all, and thank you for allowing me (and others) to view AND review your great fanfiction. Please post again ASAP, this just made my day!!!!

A few things: 1). I really like this story and where it's going so far. If you could just explain 'Dog' and give some more information regarding him and the events of 'Rose' titled chapter, that would be great. The action seemed sudden and kind of 'out of left field' as they say.

2). yes, I have been reading this fic for a little bit, the only thing is up until this point, I have been a non member instead of a 'full member' of the aff.net community. If you would allow nonmember reviews, then I know that you would receive more ideas, comments, and overall support from your readers.

Thank you for posting this, please take this into consideration

The chapters are still teasingly short!!! ah u like to taunt me dont you lol. You did a good job of including the comics events. But its looking less and less like were going to get to see logan- or should I day james :P -and sabortooth going at it like real animals >:) yes I have a dirty one tracked mind lol. Well I hope to see more chapters up soon.

oh ho! now that was a GREAT chapter ^.^ Lets see those 2 try to call that a little puppy fight lol. I must say it is not every day that you read a fight scene that is so well written. They tend to end up to wordy or to impossible sounding at parts. But u fell pray to neither problem. It really is a shame that more people are not reading this story :( sadly a lot of people don't tend to come to this section of the site as much as others :P the losers lol. And I'm sorry you don't have a reliable beta... If you are despite well lol I would love to be helpful ;) and since i have no life the waiting time for the betaed chapters would be short lol. Well Im happy to see more updates and I'll be even happier when I see more of them :D

Ohhhh this is interesting indeed :) You did a surprisingly good job of altering Logan (or should I say James) with out letting him get to OOC. The last chapter was a bit out of sorts I must admit, but Im just such a fan of this parring (I wonder why there are so few good stories about them???) that I'm already dieing to see the next chapter of this go up ;) Keep up the good writing!!!!