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by Logan306

person AgentG
schedule July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Honestly I didn't like or enjoy the story, Scott just cheating on Jean like that just seems wrong and everyone just seemed very out of character. Plus then you have Emma playing with herself and yelling out Logan's name and he just walked in, what the fuck? The story goes by way too fast as well, take you time when writing there's no rush you know, and like I said the whole Scott just cheating like that really turned me off your story.