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September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awsome chapter keeep up the good work
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August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
another awsome chapter keep up the awsome work
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August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SO SAGE AND HANK FINALLY BITE THE DUST. GREAT CHAPTER KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
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August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ha! You're not fooling me again! The goblin formula (The original version at least grants the user a healing factor. Hence Norman's survival from glider impalement. Its quite plasuible tht we will se Hank again. Sage however is presumably dead. Which is quite sad.
Looking forward to more.
Looking forward to more.
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August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
another amazing chapter keep up the great work love this easter egg
“Man, I feel like Batman,” commented Deadpool, “Hey Storm, any chance you could dress up as Catwoman?”
“Man, I feel like Batman,” commented Deadpool, “Hey Storm, any chance you could dress up as Catwoman?”
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August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my stars and garters...
Interesting chapter. I look forward to more. I hope X23 and lorna will eventually be redeemed. They've not done anything evil thus far. If he's anything like canon, Beast should have been plenty strong. Although if he's only been labbing it up with Sinsiter all these years then he's wont have canon Beast's fighting skills.
Interesting chapter. I look forward to more. I hope X23 and lorna will eventually be redeemed. They've not done anything evil thus far. If he's anything like canon, Beast should have been plenty strong. Although if he's only been labbing it up with Sinsiter all these years then he's wont have canon Beast's fighting skills.
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August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
really twist change of events competly forgot about how powerful dani could be. i xcant wait to read more keep up the the awsome work
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August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ha! Well you certainly showed me. In true comic book style they weren't dead after all. In a way its a pity, Xavier actually biting it could have been just as interesting. Still looking forward to this continuing. Xavier's going to have to pull some serious mojo. Whoi's actually in command of the Hellfire club at the moment? Is Xavier just got his loyal pawns or will he be able to control the chunks of the club, Selene isn't in direct command of?
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August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First; Something that really bugs me; its Shinobi Shaw, and James Proudstar, with an 'i' and a 'r' not Shanobi and Poundstar. (though the latter does fit his character rather well)
On this chapter; Xavier doesn't keep Cerebro (sorry Cerebrum!)locked up and isolated from tampering? Really? He knows he has enemies, even within the Club and yet he doesn't have a system to make sure his most important piece of equipment is unbooby tapped? I suppose with magneto on the loose, his anxiety could have overwelhemed his paranoia and common sense but still... Xavier just went down like a punk.
Oh and you killed Dani as well, so much for Xavier' ace in the hole and also that nice Sam/Dani pairing you seemed to be working towards in new Blood II. Which is a pity. Although I do like the dynamic you have between Julian and X23. Whicj I'd quite like to see advanced so x23 starts to get what love is. I'm also wondering whether Selene's minions that are more enchanted than willing are going to get redeemed at any point. Like Kurt and Alex who I liked when they first appeared. Kurt especially as been much less interesting since he got cursed.
I sense lots of kinky torture sex coming up, perhaps?
On this chapter; Xavier doesn't keep Cerebro (sorry Cerebrum!)locked up and isolated from tampering? Really? He knows he has enemies, even within the Club and yet he doesn't have a system to make sure his most important piece of equipment is unbooby tapped? I suppose with magneto on the loose, his anxiety could have overwelhemed his paranoia and common sense but still... Xavier just went down like a punk.
Oh and you killed Dani as well, so much for Xavier' ace in the hole and also that nice Sam/Dani pairing you seemed to be working towards in new Blood II. Which is a pity. Although I do like the dynamic you have between Julian and X23. Whicj I'd quite like to see advanced so x23 starts to get what love is. I'm also wondering whether Selene's minions that are more enchanted than willing are going to get redeemed at any point. Like Kurt and Alex who I liked when they first appeared. Kurt especially as been much less interesting since he got cursed.
I sense lots of kinky torture sex coming up, perhaps?
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August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
o Crap is all i c an say keep up the good work