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for Pillow Fight

by crazyhorselady

person Play Dough
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Bad spelling and a weird-ass ending. This just seemed like someone's warbled thoughts placed down in a rush.
person tasha
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey Peeper,
Great story. I loved it. Could you write one where Logan seduces Jean or Kurt and Amanda or Lance and Kitty. It dosen't really matter which one. You're great! Keep it up.