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for With Every Beat of My Heart

by CeeCee

schedule May 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Did I mention I really love this story? Its so bittersweet. I love your Logan and hope that he finds his happiness soon.
schedule May 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely incredible. I really hope that your muse cooperates and lets you continue to work with this. I'm very interested to see how it progresses.
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles and smiles* that was so sweet. I love it. I feel so bad for Logan...missing his wife like that. I hope Logan and Remy get together soon though...and that Logan finds some peace in his life. Please...don't leave me hanging!
person Beej
schedule March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I was so excited to see an update! Love the way Remy and Anna played, very cute! Logan's pain at thinking of Jeannie was so natural, I hurt for him. And Mattie is just awsome. :)
person audreen
schedule March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am already hooked on this story. It has a refreshing new plot and I was drawn to the sad yet hopeful tone right from the begining. I also admire how you put never fail to write Remy, Logan and all the other players into a vastly different reality but maintain their basic characters. I especially love how you write Remy, the physical description, his charisma, his lines and accent... perfection. This is a great start and I am looking forward to more.
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sad and sweet. Brought me to tears. Really loved it. Nice job on this one.
person Beej
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ouch! This has so much potential. It's beautiful like a storm. Just like all your stories I got drawn in and hopelessy lost. Hopefully we'll see an update soon. I miss you at L/R. I wish we could talk you into coming back.
schedule January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw, I am honoured, sweetie!!! Thank you so much! You write such wonderful stories. I am glad I inspired someone to share my delerium with :).