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for With Every Beat of My Heart

by CeeCee

schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This AU fic is surprisingly fantastic, omg. I love it. The way it's drawn out is grand and makes the kissing scene all the better. The characterization is very good, and you are also excellent at setting the mood~ so to speak - the awkwardness from Logan's uneasiness is palpable. <3
schedule June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*sighs* I keep waitin' and waitin' for another chapter and since I hadn't read this story in like...3 months I decided to check it out and found what? Another great chapter...so maybe I'll just have ta haunt yer story...and maybe you on the Yahoo group. Heh. Great job.
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful !!! So tender and sweet and sad and wonderful !!! I loved this chapter... I know Remy will help Logan love again and all will be well. Thank you for writing such a warm and tender love story.
person Beej
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's about damn time. *sigh* I loved this line so much...

Yes. The word was a feeling, echoing in his consciousness as Logan’s tongue caressed his, smooth as velvet.

It's so good to have you writing LoMy again. :)
person Beej
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So nice to see an update! Mattie is a joy, and I actually love your Anna. I never thought I'd say that! I hope the muse keeps screaming in your ear. ;) Thanks for continuing to share! :)
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh Wow... I had tears in my eyes at the end of this chapter... What a beautiful story you have going on here.. I know you have The Thrill is Gone as well but this one is so special... I can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love with this story. You really have a beautiful way of writing, and I really like how you take things slow with the characters. I hate the stories where it's all fast and hurried and feelings just appear out of thin air without the characters actually experiencing anything with each other. Keep up the good work.
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, another great chapter in this heartwarming story. I am so falling in love with this story. I can't wait to read more.
person Beej
schedule May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Forward motion. Gotta love the pup, I think she's playing matchmaker. It's really nice to read you again. :)
schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles* Lovely as always...and filled with emotions. Poor Logan, missing his Jeannie. And poor Remy. He's not sure what to really say without bringing back memories of her. I'm so happy to see this continued. Please write more soon!