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April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it so far!!! Can't wait to read more! You really capture Rogue and Remy's personalities!
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woo!! Early chapters are always a bonus, and our promised Romy was delivered, moreso than even I expected!
Personally, one of my favorite bits of the entire chapter was the dinner scene, Gambit's tirade on 'Cajun' food was hilarious, and seemed blatantly in character.
Also, a brief note to whomever declared that Gambit referred to himself only in the third person, you're confusing the comic Gambit with the version used in the 90's animated series, which is understandable, yet incorrect.
Personally, one of my favorite bits of the entire chapter was the dinner scene, Gambit's tirade on 'Cajun' food was hilarious, and seemed blatantly in character.
Also, a brief note to whomever declared that Gambit referred to himself only in the third person, you're confusing the comic Gambit with the version used in the 90's animated series, which is understandable, yet incorrect.
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, another awesome chapter. Loved the ROMY that was involved and its good to hear that the police caught the guy who stole your stuff and that you got your laptop ;) Hopefully see you in two weeks.
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March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thankfully, as you promised, there was little Rouge/Bobby to interfere with the Romy goodness hopefully obtained in the next chapter. Glad to hear that we'll get a new one soon!
As always,
Anonelbe
As always,
Anonelbe
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March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ouch! That's got to hurt. Sorry to hear about your computer and your xbox. Were you insured? Anyway on to the stuff about the chapter. I really loved it as i have all the chapters. I'm pleased to hear that we will be having more ROMY in the next chapter, i want Bobby gone. Does that make me a bad person? I'm hoping that Sarah comes soon. She sounds adorable. Looking forward to the next update, so give it to us soon.
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February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story alot and can't wait to read the next chap. I do not ctique much, only if something really bothers me. So please just expect a lot of praise :) This seems to be a well thought out story and can't wait for more to unfold.
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February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First off, I need to apologize for my lack of a review for the last chapter, as I barely had time to read it before you posted the newest chapter.
Second off, I love the attention to detail you've done with this chapter, as well as the epic amounts of Romy in the chapter. A shame about the next chapter's lack of it, but with that lack comes a promise of more Romy in the chapter after that.
Always awaiting the newest chapter
Anonelbe
Second off, I love the attention to detail you've done with this chapter, as well as the epic amounts of Romy in the chapter. A shame about the next chapter's lack of it, but with that lack comes a promise of more Romy in the chapter after that.
Always awaiting the newest chapter
Anonelbe
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February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very good chapter, looking forward to the promised ROMY, hope we get there soon. I know exams can be a nightmare but i hope you update soon.
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January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, you haven't had enough reviews for it seriously. Who doesn't love a little ROMY? Anyway just thought i should tell you how much i'm enjoying it.
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning! Remy seems a little off in character, but I can't pin point anything major. Another thing, Remy almost always refers to himself in third person, you typically write him speaking in first. Hope school is going well!