rate_review Reviews

I love this story, I really do....Just..."Hahn" means rooster. Literally! So you had Kurt tell Kitty how good she felt on his rooster! It cracked me up big time. I can understand how it happened; you translated the word "cock", didn't you?

Don't do it again. It can turn a story into an unintentional comedy. xD

Great story. Please continue.

I loved this first chapter. Though I have to say that Kurt is a bit out of character, it's tough making a person such as Kurt into something sexual with his strong spirtiuality (I'm sure I spelled that wrong) but I think it was a good job what you did. *rushes off to the next chapter*

Gah!! I can't beleive Kitty would do something like that. Even I felt quilt.

Wah! I don't know what I would of done if i were in her shoes right now. I couldn't even rationalize how horrible I would feel if I were kitty right now. I feel so sorry for Kurt. This was a awesome chapter, you write so well.

Three things to say.
Great long chapter, I loved it.
OMG I can't believe the turn of events. It's so sweet how Kurt offers to take care of the baby for Kitty. I'm horrified by her father's action though. He should be made that she's with someone overage and her teacher and whatnot.. but not because Kurt is a mutant when their own daughter is one too. That just two faced there. He made me mad. I hope her father won't try and cause too much trouble. Though I can't wait to see his reation when he sees what Kurt looks like.
UPDATE! I know it's only been a little while from when you posted this but I must know what is going to happen now that their is a baby in the mix! What is Xavier going to do?