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for The Streets

by fourpawsonthefloor

person hitsuni
schedule June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i really really hope you are still updating this!! Despite whatever that went on in X-Men origins, i would love to see this continued! And i love your writing!
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*fangirl squeel*
I've never been one for Logan/anyone, but you certainly changed my mind. And when you add to that the fact that Remy's my absolute favourite, and because of that is something holy and untouchable, you might start to realize how much you've thrown my mind upside-down and made me like this fic.
The characterization is perfect. Remy is himself even while being gay and with just the perfect touch of a tragic past (marking him but not shaping or defining him). And Logan is the tough bad-ass with the perfect shade of a gentler side (not like a hard candy with a soft center but more like a moon with an unseen dark side). It's just perfect.
And the flow of the fic is amazing. The situations that shape the characters, the way you write them and guide us through them, and the language you use in it, the emotions...
And then there's the sex. Which made me purr. Very prettily written indeed.

I like this fic verrrrry much ^-^
And I hope you keep on writing ;)
person audreen
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOT !!!! Definitely worth the wait.
person Shivawn
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I absolutely love Logan and Remy stories! I LOVE LOVE LOVE your story. I'm sad that chapter 5 was extremely short...but DAMN! Logan-angst is just so hot and the thought of Remy and Logan getting it on sometime in this story (be it next chapter or 20 chapters from now) is exciting in and of itself AND THEN Remy finding out about Logan's age. HAHA That was priceless! XD 'You're what? Thirty maybe?' 'Dunno, sixties or something.' ::stares:: lol I love Remy. He's totally adorable and I LOVE how you've written his character. This is how I've pictured him...tough ass kid who relates to Logan more than anybody! :D I really can't wait until you have the next chapter up. It's an amazing story you've got going.
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter. Short, but good. Still watching for more. ;)
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story, I'll be watching for updates. Good work.
person luvsjazz
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story so far. Good to see someone's still writing remy/logan.
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
huh, never really seen this take on things. Really like it! you're writing style if wonderful and I love the way you pick on Bobby. lol, straighter than a damn ruler, liked that one. Heh, anyway, hope to see more soon!
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ROFL! That is nicely done; I love the characterization. Maybe Remy's thinkin' he can hook up wit' de girl who can' touch, ne?

Wonderfully written, and I hope for more soon!