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nice big difference in this than on ffnet keep it up

Uh...instead of feeling violated and scared, they become sex machines. Ooookay....

great i noticed a few changes mostly at the end any way keep it up hope you have the next chapter ready soon.

Well...... I have to say I'm impressed..... I'd say you planned that out pretty well.... Wrote it wonderfully too. The first part actually reminded me of Bible Black, in a good way of course :P No, but seriously, keep up the great work. This is already the best story I've read in a long time, and It's only got two chapters. Good job.

chapter 2: see told ya reviews would pick up a bit more later on. I got to say though the unedited version has got some major sex scenes to it. The whole orgy thing was nicely done although I'm amazed they could walk straight and Jean could talk her jaw had to be sore as hell too, not to mention Scott totally drained as well. I have to wonder what else will they experience as time goes on too. Although I have to wonder how frustrated Sage and Selene were, watching all that had to get something in them fired up.

Anyways I can't wait to see what you got in store for the next chapter.

Big difference from the one on FFnet i thought i was alot better keep up the good work

Amazing, as always/ I can really already see how Xavier got to be how he is. It's not often that I can see him in an evil mood, mostly probably because I don't look, but eh... I really enjoy your writings, ever since I saw Hellfire and Brimstone. That's still the best fanfiction I've ever read. Because of that, I wanted to see how this would go. Already I'm impressed and delighted with what you've done. My only complaint is a couple of spelling/grammar errors strewn about, but overall, there aren't many. Keep up the good work and update soon!!

well it's exactly like in ff.net but I just hope we see major differences in this version on this site and I know that when you get the more adult content in here the reviews will pick up.

hey great story i couldn't see much diffence in this chapter than on the one from FFN keep up the good work