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Nice very Nice. A very good au with plenty of plot and enough sensuality to entice people. Keep up the good work.

It's an interesting story so far. And I'm wondering that since more and more characters are being brought in with each chapter, that it's hopefully going to lead to some massive fuckfest of an orgy at the end. Keep up the good work!

awesome story

I feel that Charles may think that he can keep Magnus in prison, but sooner or later he WILL break out! As for Pietro and Wanda, they will probably be joining Hellfire before long. Pietro is the one that will bear serious watching, with his temper and his desire to protect Wanda. As for Kurt and Rouge, I look forward to seeing what they can do for the Hellfire Club!

Wow! Now this is the way to stop the Brotherhood dead (And I do mean DEAD) in its tracks! And the way that Charles recruited Mystique was a rather unique way. I also suspect that in the future we will see Kurt and Rouge showing up as well. As for what happened at Norad, well, I may not approve of killling, but if it proved the point that Hellfire does NOT mess around, it proved it! As for Pietro and Wanda, I wonder what Xavier has planned for them.

Hey slickboy I love the sexual graphics in your stories. They are so detailed right down to the core and they make me so hot and kinda horny. Sometimes I get wet just reading some of your x-men adult fan fictions. And it makes me wonder what kind of guy you are and how you are in bed. I can only imagine how 'creative' you are during sex. Maybe if you dont mind, I can give you my number sometime later? Let me know. Well keep the great stories coming. I'll be reviewing more very soon

A very interesting chapter. I see that Hank McCoy has become a mixture of the Beast from the X-Men titles as well as the Beast from the AOA timeline. His working relationship with Sinister is going to be one that will bring much success, but also a great deal of pain in it, I'm afraid. But, this might actually work out well for both men. It gives Sinister someone to double check his work, and it gives Hank a chance to put that brain of his to use!

As for Magneto, I think that while his goals are honorable, his way of going at it are WRONG! He needs to learnt that force is NOT always the best way! And Raven is going to be the one, with the pawns, to teach him that.

Gambit and Storm: One of my favorite couples in the X universe. Those two work SO well together! They should hook up and do some jobs together, to see who truly is the best thief!

Russian mob: I smell Piotr Rasputin and Illyana showing up in the near future. And if Illyana shows up, then A) Selene will finally have her protegee and B) Kitty Pryde is going to be showing up soon as well!

Catch you next Friday when you update again!

Harry M VanHoudnos

harryV3rd@hotmail.com

Wow! Talk about a steamy chapter! I can see that Jean is definetly making a move to become the next queen of the Hellfire club with Scott at her side. And while Selene may not like it, Jean definetly is more of Emma's protege than hers.

Well, I can see that Sinister is going to have a new lab assistant soon. And while Selene did her part to bring Warren over, I still have my doubts about how well its going to work. And it was a pleasure to see Storm and Mystique on speaking terms as well. I will be looking forward to the rest of this story as it comes out on both FF.net and here.

I followed your link from FF.net to here to read the story. I like the extra details you put in, about them feeling like they were being watched, how Xavier, by way of Sage, got them to follow through on what he wanted. Now, they are in the club, and it is time for them to find out just WHAT they are getting into!