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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Like it so far. Just curious as to whether or not you'll keep writing ;p
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yeah!!!!! More updates :D.... It was another playfully wonderful chapter but as for our little boy scout scott...... yeeaahhhh.... >.< stop touching kurt!!!!!!! lol. And I love how rouge acts in this :) its just so here... and u know if u updated this more maybe more people would read it.... yeah i know im shameless in my tactics to get an update out of a writer faster lol, I dont care as im sure u know by now ^^
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December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
EY! O'm reading it and i have missed it very much, btw I'm a little overweight so I sould count as 1& 1/4 at least
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December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loooove your fic! I know you mention that not many people read it on here but plzzzz keep posting on here!
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November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very disappointing Scott *shakes head I hope he tells Kurt-chan the truth before it goes REALLY bad for them both especially for Kurt's feelings.
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's me again after a really long period of getting my internet connection cursed... Or so it seems to me. But on the bright side: I did get to read two chappies at once. Lucky me XP
At first I was very pleased with Todd but then... A Scott sex-scene! Oh my poor eyes... It was really hard task to keep reading when I just wanted to shout: Run, Kurt run! Teleport to Todd's side! It's the git who is being touchy-feely! Noooo~
I try to live in hope but when you said it would take a long time to his gittiness get his ass kicked... are we talking one-figured sum of chapters or are you going to keep us poor readers suffering for twenty-odd chappies? And what about Kurt: his childhood is going to be ruined! All his first are going to be with Scott... *pitiful sniffling*
But aside Scott-bashing I must inform you about the improvement of the narrating flow. These chapters were easy to read and I was really getting caught up in the plot. Good work!
And I'm happy to hear that my English isn't that awful. Being a student in the Department of Languages and hanging out with the English majors, it's pretty hard not to aim too high. I so envy those guys and keep comparing myself to them. (But the they have problems with our native and I can act pompous and revise their essays... XD)
Keep writing (and giving Todd more screen-time)and I'll keep trying to fing my way to aff.net without internet...
At first I was very pleased with Todd but then... A Scott sex-scene! Oh my poor eyes... It was really hard task to keep reading when I just wanted to shout: Run, Kurt run! Teleport to Todd's side! It's the git who is being touchy-feely! Noooo~
I try to live in hope but when you said it would take a long time to his gittiness get his ass kicked... are we talking one-figured sum of chapters or are you going to keep us poor readers suffering for twenty-odd chappies? And what about Kurt: his childhood is going to be ruined! All his first are going to be with Scott... *pitiful sniffling*
But aside Scott-bashing I must inform you about the improvement of the narrating flow. These chapters were easy to read and I was really getting caught up in the plot. Good work!
And I'm happy to hear that my English isn't that awful. Being a student in the Department of Languages and hanging out with the English majors, it's pretty hard not to aim too high. I so envy those guys and keep comparing myself to them. (But the they have problems with our native and I can act pompous and revise their essays... XD)
Keep writing (and giving Todd more screen-time)and I'll keep trying to fing my way to aff.net without internet...
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July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok can I point out how incredibly slow I feel now..... I just spent 5 minutes figuring out what u were talking about when u said something the naruto story lol . I didnt even know i had u bookmarked twice. Yep that used up my slow moments aloud for one day...
Now for this story, let me first say My main guy in x-men has always been and will always be Wolverine, so that should tell u how much I dont like Scott Summers... Frankly he has no right to touch Kurt. I may be tainted against him for my love of logan, or maybe its my love of nightcrawler that makes me say scott's not good enough for him((If u can guess my fav pairing u get a cookie lol))... but ive never been a real fan of toad and yet Im liking the thought of him with kurt a lot more... The story so far is still going great, and im starting to think that ur life revolves around rping all day, to have more then one great story going from the rping.
As for the naruto story compared to this one........... Thats a tough one.... there are are as many good points for this story as there are for thee other.... they both had hot rape scenes in them... that ones a threesome.... but this one has our favorite little blue dude (beast is the big blue dude)).... that one has a unique p iring in it..... but so dose this one and its in an area that has very few good stories in it... Granted in the naruto story the way the people talk to each other flows a lot better then in this one for some reason, yet thats not something to use when picking the best story...... That really is a hard choice and both stories have so many possibilities that could happen that its just not possible to pick one thats the best yet..... how about we wait until both stories r done and then i give u a definite answer ok?
Well now that ive taken up so much of ur time let me go ahead and stop typing. Keep up the good writing.
Now for this story, let me first say My main guy in x-men has always been and will always be Wolverine, so that should tell u how much I dont like Scott Summers... Frankly he has no right to touch Kurt. I may be tainted against him for my love of logan, or maybe its my love of nightcrawler that makes me say scott's not good enough for him((If u can guess my fav pairing u get a cookie lol))... but ive never been a real fan of toad and yet Im liking the thought of him with kurt a lot more... The story so far is still going great, and im starting to think that ur life revolves around rping all day, to have more then one great story going from the rping.
As for the naruto story compared to this one........... Thats a tough one.... there are are as many good points for this story as there are for thee other.... they both had hot rape scenes in them... that ones a threesome.... but this one has our favorite little blue dude (beast is the big blue dude)).... that one has a unique p iring in it..... but so dose this one and its in an area that has very few good stories in it... Granted in the naruto story the way the people talk to each other flows a lot better then in this one for some reason, yet thats not something to use when picking the best story...... That really is a hard choice and both stories have so many possibilities that could happen that its just not possible to pick one thats the best yet..... how about we wait until both stories r done and then i give u a definite answer ok?
Well now that ive taken up so much of ur time let me go ahead and stop typing. Keep up the good writing.
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June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm hooked! the plot line is interesting, and the characterization/voice is well written and pretty canon for the most part. thanks for sharing and hope to see the next update soon!
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June 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm too lazy to log in... but this fanfic is AWSOME... I don't like Toad... but I so want him to get with Toad in this fanfic. =^-^= *Huggles Kurt plushy*
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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol nice. very nice. There needs 2 b more stories like this. and if they were even half as well written as this one I would be one happy camper. U have a real charm 4 catching the persona of each of the x-men (and the brotherhood members) and keeping them real. I hate it when they go all OOC. It tends to tick me off lol. Well ur doing a splendid job, so go have a cookie, and I shall await an update!