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by xireth

person Shadow Slayer
schedule February 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
More T_T pwease?
schedule February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was worried you'd never post the next chapter, attention gripping all the way through once again.
schedule December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story can't wait to read more.
schedule November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY! This story is not forgotten :)! good update, it feels like the story is still building up to good points and I cant wait for them. And can I point out when logan came in a saw them I was sitting here in my room yelling "yes yes! threesome! THREESOME!!!" ... then my friend tossed my remote at my head :/ dont I feel loved lol. But yes I know just fantasy on my part there lol. I love how your stories take me to so many different places in my twisted little head lol. and man scott has not eared kurt, hes just not good enough for him lol. I can wait for the next update!
schedule November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's great to see another chapter of this up; I was always sad to see it never got finished.

A few things: a swear word is an expletive, not an explicative, and Logan almost never uses real names. I think he's basically only used real names for the people he's loved: Yuriko, Jean (comicverse), and whatsername from his childhood. Kurt is Elf, Rogue is Stripes, Evan is Porcupine, Scott is Slim or Shades or Scooter, Jean is Red, and so on.

Please keep going; I want to see more of this.
person anonanon
schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a trove of literature I have found, this story brims with bot plot twist and twisted hearts abound. Thank you for posting this excellent piece of fanfiction so far, please continue to do so when possible.
person Anon
schedule October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just wow. Begging you to continue this please!!! Its so rare i find a fic that I enjoy as much as this, and it seems like everytime i find one as good as this its unfinished. Love the characters, the drama, the angst, the smut ;) Please update soon, do it for the fuzz-butt! Let a toad have his day plz! Never thought i could ever like toad as a character but wow. A++++++++
person Kidea
schedule May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
+clings to you in desperation and cries+ "Oh God please! Please write more!!
I hate long fics but I decided to give this one a go and I HAVE SEEN THE LIGHT!!
I FREAKIN' LOVE THIS FIC!
I was hooked from the word go! Please, please, please tell me you'll update T^T
<33 Kidea
P.S. I have cookies shaped like Kurt with blue frosting if you do 8D
person Zayroen
schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well I love your story! i totaly would lOVE it if you updated!
person Scereyaha
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm still reading! I'm not sure how long since oyur last update... but I would like to know what happens. Have you stopped the roll playing? Do you need someone to cover some rolls? Any ways... Hope your doing well and good luck ^^