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Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! Someone finally wrote something, and WOW, that was VERY good!! :D

Wonderful idea for your fic.. and your portrayal of Pyro is close enough for me. I definitely like his pseudo fetish with Amara and her magma form. Definitely different and something that I haven't read or seen before now!

I hope to read more if you are in the mood to write more!

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Oh dear God... please tell me that this is not the end of John's corruption of Amara? There's so much more he can do to her, and even more that she can allow him to do to her and that she can do to him! This really is the yummiest Amyro fic I've ever read, and so I'd be very sad to see it end. You've got so much potential sexiness to work with when it comes to these two; please, don't end it anytime soon!

Ooohhh... tease. I was getting my motor revved when I saw there was a new chapter for this and then... sigh. Update quick; you're doing a fantastic job!

Thank God someone finally wrote some decent Amyro erotica! I've been waiting for something like this for so, so, so long. After I finish the fic I am currently writing, I had plans myself to respond to this challenge because I am a big time Amyro fan. The only other erotic John and Amara fic is on FF.net "The Fire Within," and it doesn't quite reach the heights that yours so deliciously promises. Keep up the great work! I look forward to reading the rest!