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for Mea Culpa

by Demonicneko

person Cassie
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was the best Nightcrawler fic I've ever read. You did such a wonderful job! I totally enjoyed reading something that didn't throw him into a pathetic way of sleeping with whoever. You actually had an awesome plot! I just can't tell you how impressed I am with it :) You should consider a sequel :)
~Cassie
person shiriki
schedule December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was so good. I like the pairing of Kurt & Orora. This was well written. I like the confusion and struggle that Kurt was eperiencing. That made the fic even more intruging. This was great and I hpe to writre Kre Kurt/Orora stories.
person Tique
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Augh MORE!!
person toni wilson
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you wrote a very good story as a whole and the lemon part was great.
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A very nice addition to an already riveting story. I understand the thing about life getting in the way and stuff, it happens to me too, so I can't really scold you or anything. ^-^ But it was great to finally have a new chapter to read, and I think the wait makes it even better sometimes. Your little joke before the lemon was funny, I knew you weren't serious ;P can't fool me, nope.

Anyway, I look forward to the next chapter. :D
person Shaidow
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
for your second lemon i'd that was fantastical. can't wait to see what Logan does about his Jack though.
person Coral
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story for a wonderful pairing. I love your characterizations and you have the fine makings a tasteful smut writer. kudos!
person Julia
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, finally updated! **Very happy**

And I like that latin epiphany thingy. Kurt is still cute, so is that last line. _Nice_ lemon, though it could have some more reactions - as it is, the graphics are described, but not so much what they do to two of them. (This coming from somebody who has difficulties even writing about a lemon scene, much less writing one.)

Am looking extremly forward to the solution to the Jack Daniels. Angry Wolverine is always fun. Especially when he is angry with somebody whom he can't hit properly on account of the target teleporting away.
person taekwondodo
schedule October 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! You got it up. My annoying persistence finally pays off. It was a very nice little lemon, thank you. I liked his public access TV epiphany, very cute yet profound. Is Logan gonna try and whoop his poor li'l tushie? I'd like to see him try after what our elfie boy did in the White House. I usually read and write primarily Evo and comic-verse stories, but I do love Kurt in any of his incarnations. Nice, will wait eagerly for next bit (and nag if necessary, as you know I'm not above that).
Thanks for sharing.
person Tiisis
schedule October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. Loved it to bits! ^_^ Have to wonder if it's a primal part of our brains that remembers having a tail that makes it so erotic don't you? Hmmm... There's food for thought. I look forward to future installments of this.