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for Mea Culpa

by Demonicneko

person poison.puff
schedule April 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love this story,I hope there will be more :3
schedule November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me there's more to come. Nicely done so far and I'm looking forward to more.
person CeeCee
schedule October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was gorgeous. I love Kuroro as a pairing, and I haven't seen a lot of X2 related fic with them, surprisingly, so this was a welcome surprise.

The part when he ran off with Logan's booze was cute.
person Hitsuki
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like what you've got here so far and hope you update soon!
person jetuke
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is great! I just love Wagner's conflicting emotions and poor Storm. Hope to read a new chapter soon and keep up the good work! XD
person vampkestrel
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*drools*
great story can't wait for the next one...... man kurt is sexy
person Cre
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a really sweet story. I never thought of a Kurt/Ororo pairing before because I am and will always be a Ro/Lo fan, but your story made me see the light! You did a very good job keep them both in character. It made the pairing that much more believable. Brava!! I hope your story inspires more writers to consider Kurt and Ororo as a couple.
person ysolla
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
When will you be writing more of this story?? Will you be?
If you do please email me.
the_mystical_tooth_brush@sailormoon.com
person MagicalMe
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the Kurt/Ororo stories. You really captured it! THe lemon wasn't bad at ALL!
person Alyssa
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This piece is a little spotty. Sometimes your writing is very strong, and then at other times it regresses. Kurt's dialogue, for example. At times you write his speech beautifully; articulate, and then there are other times when he sounds like a frat boy. Be consistent. That same concept pretty much applies to the whole thing: be consistent! There's some beautiful writing going on. It simply needs some tweaking.