rate_review Reviews

This hit so many delicious kinks my emotions and libido went for a pleasantly wild ride. Thank you so much for this wonderful fic!

This is offically one of my favorite stories. ^^
I adore your Victor. If cannon Creed had the personality and morals of your Creed, Wolverine would fall to the wayside.

And you handled the emotional response of rape, no matter how gentle the rape (which I also adore you for, so unusal!), really well. It seemed very true to life. I'm a huge Crawler fan, and he was written spot on, but Creed was defininatly the driving force that made me read this entire fic in one sitting. He was so REAL and likeable. My favorite kind of villian/hero. I've never seen him written like that before and I really, really wish this was cannon, haha.

Hopefully you'll feel inspired to write more Sabertooth eventually. I'll be re-reading this fic (and your others) in the meantime. :D

Oh, by the way, the formatting messed up on Chapter 8 and made the whole thing bold.

Thank you so much for the great story!

Well, normally, I make it a POINT not to review aff fics. Partially, because I find the whole premise a little embarrassing and partially because they're rarely any good. This, however, was AMAZING! I LOVED it. The sex scenes were absolutely perfect. I like how they had the elements of rape while still being a hell of a turn on. The situation was fantastic. I loved Kurt's illness and the strange sympathy you illicit from the reader on Sabertooth's behalf. The idea that he can't help himself makes this whole rape scenario actually plausible. Personally, I disagree about Mystique but, as most of the description is from Sabertooth's point of view, I can easily let that slide. Pacing is absolutely right. What critique I have is VERY minor but still needs to be expressed.

I wished the last Kurt/Kitty sex scene was hotter. I know they're coming out of a rape so it's COMPLETELY understandable but, as the sick, perverted reader I am, I would've liked to get off with them in a "To hell with you, Sabertooth! We can excellent, orgasmal sex without you!" kind of way. I found rather that hard to do under their tenative guide. Perhaps a second scene or another try that same night where they get bolder could've sufficed? Also, as most of the readers of aff, I am female and I was sorely dissappointed that we didn't get Kitty's point of view during any of the rape. We got to see Victor comment on such things like "She seems to be enjoying it" and "She's getting wetter" but I would've liked to been there with Kitty through her horror, shame, and pleasure. It was fun going through it with Kurt but the two feel these on completely different levels. Kurt gets the shame of being a BOY and being raped where as Kitty has the insatiable feel of powerlessness and violation just for being a woman. I was dissappointed I didn't get to go through that with her. Also, in my mind, Kitty wasn't as strong as I would've liked her to be. Kurt was constantly protecting her and, although she plunged a knife into Sabertooth's back, I would've liked to seen her try a little harder when Kurt was being taken away for his second rape. I guess, basically, I wanted to be there with Kitty a lot more in this fic. Lastly, the MOST minor thing of all but something that irks me still, Kitty's eyes are blue, not brown. That's really easy to fix but it's hard not to be thrown out of the story when something so basic is off.

Anyway, I had a FABULOUS time reading this. Of all the fics I've read on aff (and I mostly just read the Kurtty's) this was by far the most satisfying and the MOST entertainning. I love that there was a PLOT throughout and that every motion made sense. You really thought about this and it comes through in all the most completely logical ways. That is UNBELIEVABLY impressive for a fic that, most people would think, is soley to get the reader off. If I was a member of aff, this would be my ONLY favorite. This is, bar none, the BEST fic I have read on this site so far. The exact right length for it too. The ending could've been a little better but I appreciate, along with the characters, that Victor TRIED to make up for his misdeeds, proving there was a man inside that beast. Thank you for a lovely time and a truly delicious read. I will be raping your archieves for more (pun completely, and inappropriately intended ;) ).

I liked the ending, this was good too.

I hope to read more Kurt based fictions from you.

You may could continue the Every Breath You Take story, that was the best.

It wasn't bad.

I think I missed reviewing the last chapter in the bustle of RL, but it and this one are, like usual, incredibly well written. I like that Creed is more than just a cardboard cutout villain, I like the way Kurt and Kitty both try and look out for each other, everyone is very in character and the sex is well done and fits the situation. I wish the next chapter wasn't going to be the last, I'd love to see the long term fallout and recovery from this for the characters. *sigh* Every time I read your stuff it makes me think I should get off my ass and start working on fic again instead of staying sucked into the instant gratification of RP. Thanks much for sharing and looking forward to the next chapter...and whatever you write after.

Good.

This was a really good chapter.

Okay, I've always liked your writing, but I officially love how you've handled Creed here. He's a monster, but you've given him depth and motivation and it's incredibly well done. I really like how you're handling everyone in this. Thanks so much for sharing.

Great!

I can't wait the next chapter.

More soon please? I really want to know what happens next. Interesting seeing Creed as something other than a complete monster, though still plenty evil and amoral.