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February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this. Very sweet and very touching. I love the way you write and you're obviously comfortable with writing everything from drama to romance to action but the family dynamic you have going on in this prequel to Hanging By A Moment really stuck out to me. Logan makes a fantastic father and Ororo - well, we all know that she'd make the best mother ever. Their little one on one scenes with littleScott were very heartwarming.
Awesome work!
Awesome work!
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December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked. Quite a bit, even. Well written. You got into the head of a kid who's been having problems his whole life.
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December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So that's it for now? Well I had hoped for a bit more and all the time skipping made the last chapter go by kind of fast but I guess this wasn't meant to be a fic like the first one. Oh well the Sarah scene was a nice touch though but not enough Logan/Ororo scenes I think to keep people interested.
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter shame that it is over any way i liked how the story in this chapter went year by year as scott got older that was good can't wait to see what story you put up next.
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December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3
Well I liked the background for the new characters you put in a nice blend of the actual Marvel stuff with things that make this universe as well that work nicely. Touching moment there at the end and I liked the Sarah/Scott moment as well. Can't wait until he meets Clarice since I bet she'll be his first friend his own age, also wonder how you'll handle how she looks too.
Well I liked the background for the new characters you put in a nice blend of the actual Marvel stuff with things that make this universe as well that work nicely. Touching moment there at the end and I liked the Sarah/Scott moment as well. Can't wait until he meets Clarice since I bet she'll be his first friend his own age, also wonder how you'll handle how she looks too.
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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter i liked how sarah went and met her new brother that was good on how she was not sure on how to do it. any way i liked the bit at the end Ororo helping him get over his nightmare like any mother would keep up the good work.
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2
Well I see a couple of cameo roles in this if I got things right, Greer and Morph showing up in this. And that was a nice little chapter and I can't wait to see the next one on how Scott fits in with the home and everything. Will Clarice be like his first friend given she seems to be the only person his own age around the area. And how Sarah and him interact as well will be interesting.
Well I see a couple of cameo roles in this if I got things right, Greer and Morph showing up in this. And that was a nice little chapter and I can't wait to see the next one on how Scott fits in with the home and everything. Will Clarice be like his first friend given she seems to be the only person his own age around the area. And how Sarah and him interact as well will be interesting.
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December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter loved how you told us about scott and his past made me feel really sad. any way i hope he can feel like he's got a family now that Logan and Ororo have taken him into their family.
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November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very nice chapter for a good story. So you've gone back to your first story again writing what happened at the begining, good idea its good to know what happened back then rather than just having one chapter i your old story saying that scott was taking in by them, can't wait to see what it is like when they tell Sarah that she'll be having a brother keep up the good work.
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November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I'm very glad to see that you decided to get this up and running, I look forward to this little prequel to your first fic on this site, hopefully it's just as well received. A nice start as well with everything going on, although how old is their daughter in this story not sure if you stated that plus maybe expand on the Creed thing a little later on as well.