rate_review Reviews

Love this; the writing's so fun and the sex is hot. Write more, please :)

I like it
Keep it coming
and you really should read the New Wariors if you like Jubilee
She's Second in Command of the New Wariors and it is BAD ASS to see her lift a TRAIN LOCOMOTIVE over her head
plus she's thumbing her nose at Stark and the US government
it's great

sorry but I didn't like chapter 2 at all, first thing preview first you got no spacing and they just met and you're having them screw each other? i'm sorry but that's just lame, if this was a cheesy one shot then I can see it but I thought you were going for a serious fic. I was looking forward to some leading up to it making it worth while and yeah I think Pete can work with women his own age hell I like the Pete/Sage thing going on since they compliment each other.

Even though Jubilee is more grown up that whole thing was just very OOC of her than in the last chapter. Plus I had hoped to see some other couples for a fic to make it more interesting. sorry I had hopes for the fic but this chapter made me change my mind, I do wish you luck with this and hopefully someone else will take an interests to review as well.

well no sex yet but I hope to see that later on, although what is it with Pete and younger women, other than Sage he seems to like them young lol. Although will there be other couples in this fic as well? You could always have a hot scene with them as you lead up to the Jubilee/Pete part later on since I doubt they'll get it on right away.

Are Dazzler and Juggeraut a couple yet? Did TJ ever find someone as well? For Brian was his wife brought back (hell you know eventually they will they brought back Betsy and she was killed, they had the body and buried her and they still brought her back not that I'm complaining) Oh and speaking of her, does she had the Capt. Britian powers or just her regular ones and just has the title now?