rate_review Reviews

I love your story. You round out will all of the main characters in the story instead of putting focus in only one or two. It's a good storyline with well-rounded characters, both antagonists and protagonists. I hope you update this story soon, I'm hooked on it. I want to know how everything turns out. Both in this story, TTiS, and DitR. I think that if you can write originals like this that you could make it in the paid author biz.

Muchos Kudos!!!!!

~BL

This story definitely has me on the edge of my seat. I can't wait for the resolution.... Amazing story, thanks for being such a great author :D

anther great chapter !!! I really feel bad for Bella in this one.. no wonder she is so angry at Remy.. and so exhausted..between him and Julian she must be at her wits end... I cna't wait to read more and I do hope that Remy and Logan work through their struggles quickly...

Great chapter. I am unexpectedly feeling some degree of sympathy and understanding for Belle who is definitely one of the characters I love to hate. She is bitter but not without cause... she feels betrayed by her brother and husband after all. She is weak and not the best mother but appears to be trying. Julien is so sleazy and forceful and it is easier to find an outlet for her hostility in Remy. Where is the stolen cash? I worry that Remy will be implicated in the robbery and Logan wont be around to support him. I wish the situation between Logan and Remy resolves soon, it makes for interesting reading but I like my boys together

Oh wow. I am in love with this story. It is so well written and just really... endearing. And hot. Gods, the lemons, the CAR! lemon (you have no idea how happy that made me.) XD Anyway, I hope you continue soon. This story is one of the best I've read in a long, long time. ^^ It also prompted me to recommend it at the Logan/Remy comm on livejournal.

Noooo! Damn Julien! *sigh* Now I don't know which story I want to see updated first! Thrill, Every Beat, Diamond... you make this too difficult! Good luck with life... I really hate how it has a tendency to get in the way. I hope your son is okay.

oh no!!! you can't stop there!!! Not when they're so angry and hurt... please more more more !!!

This story gets better and better. Very hot sex scene...washing dishes will never be the same again!! PLEASE more !!! I'll beg like Remy if I have to...

There are a few of these fics floating around where there is a kid complicating things, but I must say, your story is far more believable that any other I've read. So props to you!
I also like the fact that even when this is an AU, your characters are still themselves. Remy has his past (especially with Belladonna) and Logan is a lone wolf. And they both have things that are a part of their personalities; Remy has his empathy and Logan lives through his senses, especially his sense of smell :D It's awesome!
Then there's also the fact that even though they have sex pretty fast, the emotions come to play later. I love how you go deeper each chapter and keep evolving both the story and the characters and their relationship. And it's all so grown-up! The way you write is mature, and you take things into consideration. They both have their own jobs, their own lives and the people in them. They both have their own places, the both byu groceries and cook. You make it so believable with all those little details, and also so very enjoyable.
And then there's the sex, which makes me melt.

I really hope you'll keep on writing!

I've been trying to read this for a while but life kept getting in the way. I hope you plan to keep this going. I love the complexity of Logan and Remy's relationship; Julien, Belle, Rene, Walt possibly, it gives the story depth. I really need to see Julien get what's coming to him.