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Darn you, whippersnapper! Darn you and your evil cliffhangers! Don't make me walk over there and give you a spanking! Well... hold on. You'd like that, wouldn't you???

This is one of the greatest stories I've read on adultfanfiction.net. Seriously, it truly is. Well thought out, well written and plenty of depth to the characters and the explanations from the "Doctors" to make it sound very close to fact and canon. You my friend, are very talented at writing. And you're story is making me like the pairing Logan/Ororo very much. And usually I go for slash pairings that probably aren't compatible in canon.

I honestly hope you'll continue this story one day. I don't know how many times I've either skimmed through the chapters or actually read every word written/typed.

So hopefully you'll strongly consider continuing because it would be sad to see such a great story not continued.

FROM THE AUTHOR

I have yet to figure out how to reply to reviews on this site, so I just want to post this to let all of you know that I read every critique and review and appreciate all of them. I'm thrilled that you all still find "Eye" to be of interest.

I also wish to assure those of you who've read up to Chapter 31 that I AM still working on the last chapters of this story. It's not forgotten, it's just life has a way of getting in the way and derailing plans to finish up chapters in a timely manner.

Thank you ALL for taking the time to read Eye. I know how valueable downtime can be and I appreciate that you use your time to read my stories. Thank you very much.

- W6C

Very well written 1st chapter, not the norm here on AFF.

Please finish this story. It's just too good for you not to finish.

You big meanie. You didn't tell me you were updating this!!!!!!!

Awesome fight scene. Ororo's kicking everyone's ass in a dress. More great dialogue and plotting. I still enjoy this. If I didn't have to go to my inlaws, I'd totally be updating some Rolo today. You inspired me.

Wow. I am quite astounded by the depth and breadth of this story... I am captivated by the narration and am thirsting for the next chapter... please continue... it takes me to the peaks of the appreciation of humanity and the dregs... wow.

Simply amazing story with a very well thought out plot. The conversations are intriguing and help to explain any questions that the reader develops as he goes along (although some take longer to answer than others since they are major plot points which is completely understandable). The relationship between Logan and Ororo is very complex and leaves me pondering about the depths it has reached. They both seem to crave the love between them but are unable to overcome their fear of being hurt/betrayed that comes from their pasts. It is just exciting to see the bond develop between the two. What I actually enjoyed the most about the relationship is the flashbacks to see how they first reacted to each other and how they start down the road to friendship that goes further years down the road (though I assume neither is willing to admit it even to themselves). The memory of Logan going berserk in the Danger Room was the most interesting to me. It just showed how strong the "demon" inside of Logan really is and also displays Ororo's understanding of Logan evolve as she sees these new sides to the person she thought she figured out a long time ago. Anyway you have written a magnificent story so far and I am really looking forward to reading more so I hope you decide to continue with it.

Wow, I could not stop reading this story. I don't have anything constructive, just wow!

i succesfully read every fic of urs under this catergory, and i must say i adore ur writings. i hope to see of you in the future.