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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome story. looking forward to seeing more...especially on the lance/kitty front.
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cool story. i'd like to see more on the kitty/lance front if possible. im not sure where you're going with recuing the x-men though since it would probably lea to the rescue of those captured by the brotherhood. anyhoo...keep going...great story so far
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July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see this story back. I've enjoyed the reworked version that you've put up.
However, I do hope that you avoid the pitfalls that this series had before. Rather than going lighter and lighter, I think this series would be better served by going to the dark side and staying there. Instead of Rogue convincing Rahne to join, have them rape her into submission. Have Pyro and Sabretooth visit the boarding house and have their way with the girls. You've started off dark, so why not stay there? Just my suggestion, take it fir what it's worth.
However, I do hope that you avoid the pitfalls that this series had before. Rather than going lighter and lighter, I think this series would be better served by going to the dark side and staying there. Instead of Rogue convincing Rahne to join, have them rape her into submission. Have Pyro and Sabretooth visit the boarding house and have their way with the girls. You've started off dark, so why not stay there? Just my suggestion, take it fir what it's worth.