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Interesting story you have here. Hope you will have more chapters in the future soon since this story is getting good. Keep up the good work! Hope to see more chapters in the near future soon!😁

i like this, too bad you may never continue it. if you do, i'd like to see them to try and 'discipline' boom-boom.

What a fantastic story, not only does it have a clever plot which only makes the sex scenes more poingnant. the story is well written gramattically. I am lokking forward to more great work in the future

You asked for a review so here it is. The story is good. I especially like the first few chapters. However the female brotherhood characters don’t seem to make a lot of since. Unless maybe they’re all being mind controlled which would explain rouge’s headaches. I didn’t care for the xmen side story with the horny drug. And while I like the way you describe the sex scenes. Some are hard to imagine. Probably because they’re physically impossible. Oh and whats with nightcrawler hes a good guy and then boom he just rapes another girl. and you dont explain why lance is sharing her. there relationship was the cornerstone of your story. All and all its a good story though plot points just always make my head hurt. If you want a way to fix it id bring in mastermind as a central villain. Make it so hes been the puppet master of mind alterations of everyone even mystique. magneto wanted him to force loyalty. But after a while the strain of his abilities begin to drive him mad. and those he influences have suffered from that same madness.

So there you are my humble opinion as asked for along with a few suggestions, also asked for. Take them if you wish. But it’s your story so fell free to tell me to go to hell. Ill keep reading ether way.

I'm totally addicted to your story. I'm probably the one hitting it up everyday, just rereading the good parts.
A few questions about chapter 9 though. Did Mastermind wipe some of Jean and Amara's memories or are they not telling the X-Men about the rapes? Because if they told Wolverine about it and Kitty was still in there I'm sure he'd want to kill all of the Brotherhood. Also, do Jean, Amara and Kitty still have the collars on so that they can't use their powers? It seems like Amara and Jean's are off, but is Kitty's still on?
I can't wait for more! Please update soon!

This is the best x-men evo story i have read on sff.net. Could you make the Bhood guys fuck Jubilee, Tabitha, and especially Storm too. I'm looking for a Storm/Avalanche story for years.

This is the best story i have read on aff.net. Could you make the BHood boys fuck Jubilee, Tabitha and especially Storm.
I 'm looking for a Storm/Avalanche for years.

I love your story. It is written beautifully and I can't wait to read more. Please continue to post!

I think the reason no one is reviewing is that this piece is quite dark and shocking...but we're reading it aren't we?

I am enjoying this piece, though it could use some work, especially on characterization. But it is pretty much AU.

The Rahne I'm familiar with would have gotten herself killed trying to help the other girls and would have never accepted a position with the Brotherhood under those circumstances. And I can't see Rogue as being that callous. When she absorbs someone's powers, she becomes that person--she would have to be pretty darn cold to feel no compassion for the people she touches.

All of the Brotherhood are a bit darker than I can believe, except for Mystique. But, like I said, I'm still reading and enjoying it.

awesome. would love to see some action with storm...as wella s magnetos acolytes joining in if possible.