rate_review Reviews

Wow.

wow... this was so hott!
I really wish you had written a sequel for it... wow!
and I had thought i had read all of your work!

Oh please update! I would have never thought of this in a million years, but you pulled it off just grandly! I just have to know what happened when she got back to the mansion! What is Logan gonna say! Ha Stormy's a bad bad girl! Id give my first born for a night with Vega! He kept her dress, she took his shirt, that just screams reunion! Please consider writing more!

This is one of the best crossover fics I have read. The best part about it is that you don't just throw shit together for the sake of the story. You made an effort to make this viable. Hot, steamy, well written. I hope you do decide to do another part.

*_*

That was so hot.

Excellent.

I love the song Spin Spin Sugar and I love this story. Very hot.

This was yummy. I would like to see you continue with this, too. This is an excellent pairing, and you don't just throw them in bed together. You established a story and made it more than just PWP. If you don't continue, that's ok too. This is a great one-shot.

I already read this when you LJ'ed it, but I love, LOVE this story. Vega is so rakish and sure of himself, and such an interesting match for Ororo, who in her own way is occasionally arrogant and self-assured, or at least she likes to give that impression. I like how wanton she is in this. The scene with the wine tickled me and her attempts that she would fall for his lines and his suave shit, even as she's going right along with it.

Somehow, I know she won't walk away from this unscathed, but I hope she manages to at least make an impression on him before this story is over, whether this has a happy ending or not. Also, the line about using 'turnip' as a code word was hysterical!

Very nice. Wouldn't mind a continuation thought it does work as a stand alone.