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yay i hope marissa's brother gets buttfucked or something lol shits getting real interesting thanks for the chappie !

Ooohh...mystery and sinister ties to 'family' and a hitch in the road. I am sooo loving the new direction! Especially the way Marissa's gotten under our resident grouch's skin. Thanks also for a glimpse of Quicksilver's softer side...Pietro with Rahne? Brilliant!

Please please please tell us more! I want to know what happens to Marissa's degenerate foster-brother and his cronies.

sweet its nice that pietro is softening up to her just a little bit and that the stories got serious, can't wait for the next chappie. this is excellent

thank you thank you. thats was good thougth a little more detail on what wanda and toad were doing would have been nices i liked the lances and Marissa sceene. also a bit more back history on Marissa would be nices why was she homless what happened?

Oh, no you didn't...Full-Body Lubricant? I freaking LOVE it!!

An avalanche-sized thank you for more Toad Lovin' (and not just the sex, although that's seriously hot stuff too, 'squick' or no). Todd and 'Rissa as you write them are really sweet together, I like Tender!Wanda and Decent!Fred, and...

Wait. When is Pietro going to get into "some serious shit"? Seems he's got it coming *evil* and maybe he'd mellow out and leave the lovebirds alone if the Beneficent Mistress Ginevra would distract him with a little 'trouble'. I'd love to read more!

an idea for you how about wanda get a bit of todd tongue action after party or wanda makes a another pass at Rissa and go for after talk wanda in let having a bit of fun with his tongue and what happened after that was up to her. any this is gold please dont stop keep it come

Todd and the Amazing Technicolor Turbo Tongue! (Can you order that online?) I never thought it could be done, but honey, you just made His Grossness...well, freakin' HOT! ("Thirsty, yo." I died laughing.)

You know, it would be fun to see where another chappie or two takes our star-crossed lovers. And for the record, who says a Toad doesn't need love; check out The Toad Song: http://www.mele.com/music/artist/keali%60i+reichel/collection+one%3A+kamahiwa/ (yeah it's in Hawaiian, but the gist is that we each deserve to find someone-or two or three-who will love us...warts and all...)

Speaking of, it might be a shame not to share the Wonder Tongue with the guys. Can Toad keep a Menagerie?

this is good the way you bulit up and played it out so more please.

rare to see a toad fic and i think you've written this in the best possible way ! Hope you keep writing, if not this fic than at least a bit more with toad

Like all of your stories, that was brilliant. Completely and utterly.