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for Witness

by Ginevrasn

person Lemonique
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love Marissa and Todd but the scene with her and Pyro was so hot I'm looking forward to a scene with her and Gambit.
person phatasha
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow i read about 6 chappies in one sitting and just got up to chapter 13 today ! amazing how the characters are spot on, the erotica nothing to be sniffed at either ;) please update ^^
person tank
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good stuff but i admit i don't like the idea of marissa getting with remy, toad needs some action dammit! lol
person tank
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
extremely horny chappie lol wasn't expecting some yaoi but its very hot !
person tank
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cool, need more toad though but i have faith
schedule July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, I love a good intrigue! Edit if you must, Ginevra, but I have to say I am enjoying the story line very much. I appreciated Todd and Lance getting some 'quality time' together (very hot! and Wanda and Lance were so sweet to take care of their friend) and I liked how everyone at the Boardinghouse came to Marissa's defense (as well as they could) during Magneto's visit. Major grrl power points for Marissa's courage under Magneto's interrogation on her 'ideas' and thunderous applause for Marissa's last tete-a-tete with Gambit! Moremoremoremoremore please!!
person tank
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cool i like the way you've portrayed gambit, he's nice but your always aware that he could kill you easily. wheres the toad at yo?
person tank
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so awesome, i cant believe this used to be a one-shot fic its really blossomed nicely taking on serious issues whilst having a humour that works with the brotherhood. good stuff
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, well crafted, nice sex scenes and interesting plot. Keep up the fine work eh? And if Rahne gets a sex scene or so, I won't complain.
person moringstar
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
look good dont wear your going with this but i like it.