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for Witness

by Ginevrasn

person Lemonique
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Marissa and Magneto were definitely the best part of the chapter for me.
person tank
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn this is really really fucked up lol shits so damn complicated. but the plots freakin fantastic mind ! woot !
person tank
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh crap shits getting complicated ! cant wait to see what happens next !
person phatasha
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg peter is so much sweeter then remy ! i guess its remys fault he sort of started this whole thing off lol please update soon !
person Lemonique
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the interactions between Marissa and Magneto and the rest of his acolytes. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.
person Lemonique
schedule July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the complex plot but when will we be getting back to Todd and Marissa?
person tank
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sweet glad everyones getting tough and stuff, hope freds not holding to many grudges lol
person tank
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
for some reason marissa with remy doesn't sit well with me but marissa with pyro is fine with me, im not sure why lol probably cause remy always gets the girls just once i wanna hear fred or peter getting some. excellent chapter by the way.
person phatasha
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG john is so cool ! very chilled out (irony) i especially enjoyed the magneto/marissa scene very good writing. please update !
person tank
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
pure genius i hope toad gets tough a hopeless idea i know lol good stuff smut always good in my book