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for Witness

by Ginevrasn

person tank
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmmmmm a pregnant marissa may be restricting but it would be cool to have a baby in the brotherhood environment, i can picture fred and pietro panicking lol i hate remy lol good stuff
person tank
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr marissa ! your right at least she asked :) toad needs to get even though me thinks but not ina spiteful way if that makes sense lol
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was HOT!!!!! more please!!
person Lemonique
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought the reunion was satisfying.
person tank
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
really good chappie but i feel so bad for toad ! finding out 4 men are banging his girl !?! including victor !?! and then he's forced to make a baby ?!? im sorry i just can't help feeling that after marissa has manipulated all of the acolytes that she nots pulling the same tricks on toad. just seems shes out for herself . sorry i've got a jealousy problem lol great stuff !
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome!!! please tell me thats not it
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh wow shes going home!!! bout time..i hope she gets preggers by todd and it deosnt make her sick
person tank
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
god i feel so bad for toad ! i bow to you for doing the blob scene that was very hot woot !
person phatasha
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
got me whet, enough said lol. poor todd :( hope he gets his comupance soon enough ! please update soon !
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the Sabertooth smut....it was awesome...the rest was awesome too...i hope she goes home soon...i like her with Toad better