rate_review Reviews

I loved this story so happy I stumbled upon it.

I was impressed with how well you took a seemingly random idea structured around getting your OC to sleep with half the cast of Evolution, and then turned it into something that was actually quite readable. The tension you built up in the plot was fairly well sustained, although I must admit at one point I was all "oh look, *another* threesome. haven't seen much of that in this story" :rolleyes:.

Still, I enjoyed this.

Holy... cow! I don't know where to start. O_O

I've been reading your fic since the last five days, loosing sleep, being completely infatuated... At first I was in it for the sex... and then, by the time of the orgie at the party... I had grown bored with it and had since long been in it for the incredibly exciting plot. I have no relation at all to all these X-people... I've only watched the three movies and enjoyed them. I'm really a Wolverine girl, was... now I can't stop thinking of that Remy... *sighs*

I LOVED the interaction between Riss and Remy when she was hostage. That was amazingly hot in so many ways, and NOT only sexual. You really made a person out of him, and a complex relationship between them. I'm glad you winked at that in your epilogue because I was a little depressed that they didn't end up together. I never thought they would... but still... And Faith and Hope... SO sweet! I'm a mother of twins myself. Thankfully not covered in gooey poison last time I checked... The pregnancy was hell nonetheless.

Sabretooth... what to say? That was another part of the story that had me gasping for all sorts of reasons... I reacted strongly, and in scary ways, to his violence and primitiveness... and his wish to be more than what people see.

I'm a little torn that she turned out to be a mutant as well... I don't know what to think of that. But I did start to think quite early on that she had amazing capabilities to manipulate and get people on her side and that that had to mean something... So I guess it makes sense somehow.

The only closure I didn't get was what happened to Sabretooth, Victor. I'd have wanted that.

And yes, good grief, you're truly a novelist now and I envy you! Congratulations on an amazing story! I just might have to re-read a few of my favorite chapters somewhere in the middle...

Nicolina.

Mainly posting at fanfiction.net http://www.fanfiction.net/u/832956/ Completely non-mutant stuff... ;)

I was kind of suprised that you didn't take advantage of Lance's mutant ability. He's a human vibrator. But other wise excellent chapter.

holy crap. it was a marathon read.

all i can say is most of it left me needy. i went
to bed the past two nights, and probably tonight,
wet.

thanks.

*hugs*

~blessings~
ldf

awesome ending, but what happened to sabretooth?

awww Girls? coool...yay no more chip...i dont blame her i would want it out too!!!

oh god theres so much plot lol ! glad shits starting to get to normal. good shit.

awww im gonna cry!!! what exactly did wanda do to her either time?

lol yeah Remy stole my girl....bastard. Wow Wanda's a bit.....mental lol. Good shit !